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Old 11-21-03, 03:27 PM   #1
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OMFG . . . "Lean On Me" . . . Dont Sleep Kids. Shit Is Dope

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This song is sick. Mellow and very soulful . . .

I used two different hooks on this one

Look for the switch in melodies after the second hook

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Old 11-22-03, 12:19 AM   #2
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woah del.. this wouldve been a hot beat.. but the sample was wayyy off the piano ... and the drums didnt even go together right man... the sample was off man you shouldve spent more time on this one man.try n work on it again cuz the samples are really off on this one sorry dunny

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Old 11-22-03, 04:46 PM   #3
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aiight hmm

i thought the drums were exactly on par... somebody else said this to me to. i guess ill fix it again, but damn it sounds fine to me i dont know wtf is going on lol
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Old 11-22-03, 06:36 PM   #4
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man fuck.

fuck trying to make drums correspond to the melody

fuck that fucking shit

ima just put the same old run dmc boom snap boom boom snap drums they been using since the 80's at least that shit will sound fine

trying to make the drums sound like the melody wtf was i thinking lmao

Fuck Rhythm I hate that shit lmao

aiight im tripping.... but ima be back with that boom snap boom boom snap shit. and i bet that shit will sound worse then before, just because i got that kinda luck going for me

holy moly
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Old 11-22-03, 07:53 PM   #5
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aiiight sorry for the triple freepost deluxe but im off right now


lmao i cant believe im doing this

so embarrased

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Lean on me "Skeleton" . . . aka tell me if this shit works

so embarrased

killing myself
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Old 11-25-03, 01:41 PM   #6
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Hmm, drum pattern is way off. you should be able to count a steaady 1, 2, 3, 4, 1, 2, 3, 4 with your beats. If you cant you know somethins off. That other sample that comes in is way off. The hook is empty because its just the sample and no drums or anything. It could also use some bass. Keep elevatin homie, you'll get it.
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Old 11-25-03, 01:48 PM   #7
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i am ditching this beat.

i will leave it to someone with actual skill to flip this classic sample.

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Old 11-25-03, 02:48 PM   #8
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lol that aint the attitude to have
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Old 11-25-03, 03:37 PM   #9
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yes it is lol
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Old 11-25-03, 04:23 PM   #10
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yeah this was off man... but i dont need to tell you... you know.

dont give up fam, keep doin it
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Old 11-25-03, 11:36 PM   #11
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ha...i though of doing this track my self just like a couple weeks ago.

neways...ye the drums r off, but not every hit...it's just like a few of the hits, sum of them r right on so i can see how u might not have caught it. but far as the vocal/sample cuttin it was nice.

ye u should keep workin on this fo sure....cus it's so close to bein dope. pc
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Old 12-01-03, 06:16 AM   #12
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dude....

cmon man...

cmon man....

i KNOW YOU CAN MATCH A DRUM PATTERN WITH A LOOP!...

do it del

DO IT!

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Old 12-02-03, 06:02 PM   #13
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Damn, homie! Those drums is off beat than a mug, guy. I checked out some of your other joints and they was coo, so I don;t know what happend to this song.
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u should have used the original sample that contorded voice was wack
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Old 12-16-03, 06:49 PM   #15
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not really feeling it....you just made it look like the sample was unworkable...nice try...but needs ALOT more than that.

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