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message and glass
IP: F564 0E15
message and glass
---------------------------------------------------------------------- a message in a bottle arrives at my doorstep floated here by you across a ocean of fear and hate the message full of hope love and pain hope: of being opened love- of life itself pain~from regection becuz i dont read the message... i just see you... you have drowned in the ocean of fear and hate i see your lifeless body at my doorstep and melt with sadness you died for me shot down by a driving "messenger" u were in the worng place at the wrong time trying to solve our problem which one... i dont know for when you fell struck down by lifes cruel ending the bottle was broken now all i can see is red and wet w/ tears a message of ur end surrounded by shards of glass and a corpse now cold -- |
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IP: F564 0E15
y is everyone sleeping?
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IP: 798F 2985
Dizam...thats deep
I almost drowned in your emotions girl....keep it up that joint was tight your name should be *Poetic Justice*...lol..hot |
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IP: F564 0E15
hey thanx 4 the reply... glad ya got sum emotion outa it...~much love ~poetic justice lol... ~
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IP: 7606 3345
Damnz gurl ... this was raw ...
U poured ur emotions into dis, Props O~N~E |
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IP: F564 0E15
LEAH!!! WHAT HAPPENED???? DAMMIT, IM BACK AND I NEED TO KNOW WHAT CAUSED THIS PEICE! (which by the way is FUCKING AWESME) i loved this peice... truly awesome with good emotions... awesome emotions.... the imagry was amazin... keep it flowin and when i call u today u BETTER FREEKIN EXPLAIN! lol
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