the concept of this was good and is quite true as most commercial rappers get out of their hood by rapping but then brag about the roots. I liked how you used first person as the 1st person dialogue was good and gave this piece a soliliquay feel. I found your rhymes inetersting though basic and simplicit at times, which was a lil bit so so and did affect the overall quality. However, you managed to carry the storyline with emotion which was a plus, therefore, i reckon this was an aight piece, Stay up.