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Old 07-15-05, 07:11 PM   #1
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Death, a new Path

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yo this is short but i mean this is my first poem check it........


God slashed and burned my sins with his Flame
As i rise from the ash new agenda and name
I seek a new path is it good or bad
is it right or wrong
which ever i choose im gonna be strong
the light has dimmed a path has been broken
HALO!?!? Appears this is the path that i've chosen

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Old 07-18-05, 06:08 PM   #2
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Its interesting... short... makes it seems as if even after we die we got options... we still have decisions to make...
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