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Old 10-29-05, 04:19 AM   #1
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Fighting for my life (A SONG)

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Fighting for my life (A SONG)

HOOK: Fighting for my life while writing all the strife sincere on paper
Cats fear these vapors got them toting bats spears and razors


Rhyme incredible but behind schedule like a late train
So my fate lame like a vampire I suck, wanna date a dame
Appear before folks they clap galore but fear my quotes and some
Threw beer down my throat that shit choked me felt like a bum
Now dwelling in the club, smelling like Bud is truly dumb//

HOOK: Fighting for my life while writing all the strife sincere on paper
Cats fear these vapors got them toting bats spears and razors

Designed a plan that was a crime before man and god, stands
Odd I was to sell hash and make swell cash but got hand-
Cuffed and stuffed behind bars, wrong place to land
Now face income reductions because of slum corruption damn
Now locked up the food old and greasy and that got stole
By ALEBISI from the movie OZ my plate an empty soul//

HOOK: Fighting for my life while writing all the strife sincere on paper
Cats fear these vapors got them toting bats spears and razors
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Old 10-29-05, 06:05 AM   #2
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Old 10-29-05, 09:57 AM   #3
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meh..............not really a song.........and structure was off.........decent worduse
but i've seen you post better in other peoples OMs sorry i wasn't feel'n this at all
not fo real
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Old 10-29-05, 02:33 PM   #4
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gladbag stop rapping
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Old 10-29-05, 08:54 PM   #5
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Thanks Fo Rth Eresponse Multi Come On For The Othjer Cats
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Old 10-29-05, 09:45 PM   #6
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just no look'n fo any enimies on this site i have enough on others..........beef is endless and pointless.........you just didn't structure it as if it was a song..........its more of a free verse of spoken word
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