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Old 05-04-04, 06:05 AM   #11
Terumoto
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Dude, your rap? my verse burns it, turned out flaccid and worthless,/
dont take a geometrist to figure out that you rappin in circles,/
you stopped makin progress about one line into ya verse/
the syllable count just doesnt work, despite the rhyme dictionary you keep in your purse/
Ha, big words? man you ain't educated, put common sense first/
check ya previous verse; elements, igneous rocks and sediments, its all year 9 school work/

Why didnt u rip that bitch mullet? anyone steps to me i splatter they asses/
all you did was spit shit and sit there like a dumbass, with twinkling lashes/
straighten your glasses and "oh umm... you dont know about big words but i do"/
fuck man, by what came outta you you aint got a clue too, shit u probly have trouble tyin your shoes/
with the rap standard of a 3 yr old, a bad kid, aint it nap time for you?/
shit, cant even spell simple words.. last time i checked WORSE had a 'w'/
think you a doctor, usin medical terms, you still so far from ill/
i could do it too... im so phat i need constant doses of demoxonyl/*

....there wasnt much to work with in his last verse so i dissed his otehr one too...

*demoxonyl is a dietary drug..

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