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Old 06-19-04, 01:39 PM   #1
YoUnG SkEeZ
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~ Lost In This Maze ~

I Think I'm 'Lost In This Maze' My Skins Torn 'Off Of This Face'
I Was Just 'Tossed In This Case' When I 'Cough In This Way'
It Leaves Me 'Robbed Of This Pay' And Sittin ' Soft And Amazed'

I'm 'Sworn To Sakes' Of Tryin To Create What I"m 'Born To Make'
I've 'Worn The Cape', But Does That Make The Problems 'Formulate'?
While I 'Fought To Ordinate' Its My 'Thoughts That Store The Fate'

Is My 'Emotions Truthless'? Or Are My Feelins 'Open Toothless'?
While I'm 'Soaked In Ruthless' I Can Only 'Hope To Sooth This'
Emotionless Like A 'Joke Nudist' With Problems Im 'Revoked To List'


~ Mindless Tyrants ~

God Has Stated, That I'm Left In This Life Obligated
My Dawg Has Made It, While I Sit And Comiserate
Will I Live A Day?, With This Sorow On My Dinner Plate

Up In This Trade, That Has Me Grieving Misfortune
Leaving Distortion, You Don't Wana Be Seein This Poor Kid
My Reasons Abortion, I Leavin But, Keepin These War Sins

Leavin Importance, While Believe And Seekin Antidotes
My Bleedin Stance Is Closed, With Treason I Can't Oppose
I'm Close To Ya Rain, Goin Through This Emotional Pain

I'm Choked With A Strange, Unthoughtfull Manner Of Fashion
A Sander Is Blasting, So I Can't Stand To Whats Happen
While I'm Left With Nothin Less Than A Cancerous Action



(You know how a niqqa do. Ya gots to drop some poetic shit.)
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Old 07-16-04, 03:41 AM   #2
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nice poem keep up the good job
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