Somtimes i think that its just a horrid phase,
when my mind is filled with torrid shit for days and days,
and like a broken record it just plays and plays,
the stakes are getting higher do i call or raise?
do i wage this war? or do i sit in solitude abused wat for?
lead me down this tunnel for sure ill walk the door,
u gotta listen to me cause i tell ya so,
its not supposed to be about the car and dough,
and only to my face can you tell me stop,
ima keep pressing til ur insides pop please hate me not,
or self destruct no matter leaps and bounds i wont give a fuck,
ima make u mine till my coffin shuts,
aint no choppin board here for you to break my guts,
im a bitch who knows the rules my fires getting fuelled,
my desire's got me through and true i still pursue,
wat to do with this boo he only trusts a few,
wat the heck fuck his ex im goin in for the screw,
me being human yeh i ask for more yeh more and more,
here's a piece of me that u cant ignore and-
i abhor all these fools who drill and bore my brain,
to my core fuck em all goddam these fuckin games,
wats in store yeh there's more u wana see profane,
i wana get inside their heads till i blow their fuckin brains,
when i spit with this script ima rip i wont let up,
onl fit to ya bitch i wont quit till i get him,
every dog has its day but today im getting dogged,
i dunno where to stand coz the paths getting fogged,
do i listen to my friends do i go where i choose,
got me spinnin round in cirles i aint chrome 22's,
ur confused so am i nah this games' just for kids,
like a man this wont stand coz ur givin me the shits,
but am i running jimmy rabbit i dont have it im erratic,
till u sign the dotted line my rotten rhymes are never ending,
now u on the line locking eyes now pretending,
that we just friends say again i dont follow,
u think this bullshit ill gracefully swallow?
in a flash it all changed baby maybe im deranged,
aint it strange all these games has left us estranged ,
u dont open or expose wat u feel but i listen,
the limits of my wits is written in this composition,
i cant understand why u cant set it straight,
gitter bugs in my lungs that im tryna sedate,
now i spew with this rap coz ive snapped its a wrap,
once over danielle now ive fallen back in this trap,
once agen where's the end fuck this trend can i ascend,
to a level where P**** is more than just a friend,
and if i dont suceed in this mission that ive set
only one word that matters wen im scattered its Lisette

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wow that was long but worth it nice peice....good emotion's nice ..feeling.. good job...

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