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Old 12-18-03, 09:09 PM   #16
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imagine that.

this citadel knows well, to absent-minded hustles
freeze frame, pause...
and break every mans' shuffle
time is a must so,
hap-hazardously lets abuse its sanctity
ignorant to our undoubting strength over fates candid vanity
fellow man, we're free!
have you not heard?
we shall not be prisoners to disillusions or enslaved to just words?
truth in reality first,
what deity has shown themself, proven there is sublime?
God, take me to affinity! rather you leave my faith assured in time
teach its worth, for dubiously forgeting is convenient
time is fleeting,
push play and re-evaluate how your lifes spent
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Old 12-19-03, 02:23 PM   #17
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I am Life.
I am Death.
I am beyond moons, the place where the lost gloom
I am the light in closed eyes, the latern of the womb
I am mistaken for simple vocabulary.

Fed-up.
Pissed-off.
Over-looked.
Under-looked.
All am I.
I am all.
I am your hunger. The joy which makes hearts stupper.
I am the thunder in your gut of a sins murmer.
I am your first gift.
I am your last lost.
I am your link to your creator.
I am why mercy was praised of saviors.
I am inside thee, life reaks thru thy.
I am everything... I am what feeds your eyes.

Cherish your soul.
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Old 12-19-03, 04:17 PM   #18
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She runs at full speed
away from me
away from my need which is her to confer with my seed
they are one
in a world of for's
and answers to questions left better off ignored
our religions become chores
as our temples sweat in unison
sponsered by the wind
going through us
at full speed
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Old 01-08-04, 02:07 PM   #19
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Stop!...all has become just an eternal glow of frantic faces
in dark and light places...this world is parallel to a universe adjacent
in slow motion, the world begins to pick up the pace
the clock goes...tick....tock....tick...tock
SHUT THE FUCK UP!
NO YOU SHUT THE FUCK UP!
the world never took the time to mend putant deeds, evil has become the reign of souls once more
upon this world and many galore...minds do not wish to explore la final amor
death to the left....death on the right and in the air!...its in their eyes...its depicted and can be extracted from their very souls...
maybe you thought everything wouldn't have the chance to change...but i had hope that the world could see and change....within the freeze frame time capsule.....


DOPE!!!!


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Old 01-11-04, 03:58 PM   #20
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Its Been A While Since I Wrote To A Pic

Good To See I'm Owning Rhetorical Insights Best...

The World Hurries To Get A Brief Moment On Top
And Whats Not Is That You Make The World Stop
Writing Is A Passion, When People Rush Its Short Lived
Then, Your Someones Bitch, Hurrying To Be Along Side With
They're Above You, Yet You Dont Know Who Or What They Are
A Machine Which You Wanna Be, You Tell Your Lucky Star
Dreams Can Be Far, Also Dreams Can Hold You Back
You Face The Facts, Dreams Are For When You Know You Lack
But When The Facts Face You, You Decide To Run & Hide
Courage Turns Like The Tide, You Now Find Yourself Far Behind
You Seem You Need To Cheat To Get Ahead, Speed Of A Bicycle
But Why Change Your Speed, And Alter The Life Cycle
Turn And Face The Strain, Nothing Is Meant To Be How You Think
There's No Pocket Guide On How To Live, Shit Happens In A Blink
Slow Down, Speed Up, Do What Is Best For You
Get Ahead In Life, But Dont Rush, Do What You Gotta Do
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Old 01-13-04, 07:35 PM   #21
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Probably one of the best so far (this write to the picture thread that is).
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