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Old 01-08-05, 06:40 AM   #1
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Old 01-08-05, 06:26 PM   #2
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there come's a time when two people connect from diffrent backround's...
with father's saying stop...not relising there love will never back down...
one beast,one woman,bound together in a tranquial spiral of destiny
some called it wrong,some labeled it outrage's,some simply classed it as blasphemy
they lasting see, this isnt just a phase to be worn out and torn out,
this is something real,she helped pull the hatefull thorn out,
but now they ar eto be confined in there own space,so there love will be lost
if they are seperated,year's of terrifying hate is what the beast will taste
but they are not gonna go without a fight,they will leave without a peacfull trace...............................

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Old 01-14-05, 05:55 PM   #3
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I feel like everyone hates me and wants me dead
Like they want me to walk off Earth or have my life end
I feel like the devil is makin me walk a plank
And when he makes me my mind goes blank
And when the devil is bored, he toys with our life
He makes everything turn bad when it's going right
Why are we toys for the devils amusement?
He makes everything lies from what the truth is
he's like a master of toying with puppets
He likes causing trouble and he loves it
He hates me, he hates my family, he loves pain
He loves dark days, hates the blueskies, he loves rain
He trades your heroes for ghosts
He brings them to hell so they can roast
He'll confuse you thru anythingthru music, to friends
He keeps you confused about things untill your life ends
Only so he can eternally have your soul
Thuis game gets eaiers and better for him, it never gets old
What he wants with me is for me to disappear without a trace
He hates me, my face, my everything, he wants my life to fade
And become something of his posession
The trust incaserated and kept it
We're like a chess game for him and our king is our life
He plays this game over and over untill we have no light
To look to and we have GOD out this game
But with GOD i'll keep my balance maintained
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Old 01-16-05, 10:54 PM   #4
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2005's beauty and the beast as different as west and east
i'm ugly she loves me to death tho even sleeps at my feet
us fuckin is wrong like two left feet or a boy and a catholic preist
thats what everybody says but their opinions matter the least
haters say we obscene however we together forever she's my queen
i'll never hurt her as long as i live wife of my kids i'll fulfill her dreams
she's so sweet moved in my hell hole sleeps as my prisoners scream
cuz i'm god of the underworld which is as hard to believe as it seems
maybe it's my game that got her who knows maybe i'm slick
look at the results and how quick she agreed to sit on my dick
it looks like a diving board so maybe she stood rather tha sit
i spend my spare time rubbin her cooch and lickin her tits
an odd couple we are like billy bob thornton and angelina jollie
but we live together as satanic celebs as happy as we can be
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Old 01-23-05, 01:04 AM   #5
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yo...life's a scale
and there's always some nigga always tryin' to make ya fail
followin' ur trail, followin' ur tail
but balance it out dat's what it's all about
got sumthin' up ur sleeve?? pull it
get rid of da bullshit
gotta rap??? spit it
if ur worried ur wack forget it, get wit' it
start rappin' u could make it happen
make da crowd start clappin'
make depression start compressin'
and make da homies start guessin'
who's da best n' teach 'em there lesson
start bustin', start thrustin' get da trust n' respect u deserve
play chicken til' da other one'll swurve
conserve on da anger and hate
just wait til' it's time to concentrate
don't procrasinate when u freestyle
but wait a while til' u know it's time
then serve dat slime go and commit dat crime
use ur talents to balance
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Old 01-23-05, 06:21 PM   #6
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no runnin back to the life i had, now its all in da past
im out on my own now, no family or friends to watch my ass
troubles knockin at the door, terrorists blowin up my phone
i feel lke macauil culkin cuz now im home alone
there closin in on me i got nowhere to hide
except that one memory of family thats bundled inside
i must confront my fears, illuminate my dreams
speak my voice to the world let them noe my dreams
confronted with an ememie who really seems undefeated
everyone left me because of the way they were treated
so ill leave my message whoever reads it should go and tell
if i am not here tomorrow this is my last farwell.....
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Old 01-26-05, 06:57 AM   #7
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picture me, stone cold, like ben grim
body hard as my life, a skin full of sin
lose or win, im worst for wear
my mental state, state of my hair
ima savage, walking the path of a bear
i need a feminine heroin, to let us win
but im sick, i need my medicine
sticky green, my life sentance in
can you save me? a nigga this shady?
don't want your baby,
you a crazy lady, maybe my world made me
maybe my madness was meant to be
narcotic, psycocotic,
semi-symbiotic
yeah thats me, Dark Arch D
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Old 01-29-05, 09:41 PM   #8
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...Seriously, that's it, guys? Here's a short one...


I feel like, I'm running away from my problems but I'm trapped.
In the darkness, I'll have to gain my night vision and learn to adapt.
Though I'm surrounded, I see the hope above the beast.
I need the sun's bright light, because running from my problems is tearing up my feet.
I feel like a warrior, but my bravery and courage is gone and I'm devoid of my sword.
I can only hope to survive through the bad, so the good is restored.
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Old 01-31-05, 12:03 AM   #9
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I took the poetic non rhymin road that was less traveled

Swaying against the egde of my sanity
Fear gathers to form a monster never seen or met
Blocking one thing known as the truth
Though I am determined in my plight
My significants seems obselete why try
Why attempt to perfect prudenet positions
Why choose to oppose outstanding overcoming obsticles
Because no one else will..
Bravery and Courage pit me against the monster one on one
Because no one else was willing....
Those the odds are heavly stacked against me
I am armed with one thing....Determination against

F.alse E.xpectations A.ppearing R.eal ....Fear
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