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Old 10-22-04, 01:01 PM   #16
The Jett
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SDizzle
seems u left rv, noone knew, and returned cuz u missed us
now u say ur presense is blessed? ha, like the friggin devils christmas
dumb ass metiphore
u aint even the best of your time, just thought u'd like to know
considering socrates ideas are like his money, all play dough
its wordplay, but 4th grade'ish
now ur styles played out, and guess what dizzle just found
how you both lost last week, but still advanced to the next round
u said this in the last bar. Second line, good personal
thats funny, and bullshit.... but its only cuz this fag is gassed
cuz if u were half as good as u sigs.....no, ud still be pretty bad
Pretty funny
this match is a gimme, damn i was hoping for a real challenge
not this fruit with:
no crew, no battles, just a nack for using other peoples talent
NO
then daz comes to plate, i wont even check his battle last week
hes a mod on rb..... with 3/4 no-show's in his JUNIOR league
Ouch. nice personal
and the sad part is they'll believe what they arent sure is true
shit if you think ur tired of it, the board must be exhausted of you
No
Overall 5/10.
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Socrates
Take out these fuckin fools, 1-2 in succession
Fuck ugly, dizzle's face is a new cure for depression
Lmao. nice
You can brag about your posts and wins on RB
And i'll brag about how wife beaters ACTUALLY FIT ME
Lol. again. funny personal
Shit im here to attack, Soc's killer lyrics is on the swarm
Make dizzles chances lower then the fat hangin from his arm
Nah.
Daz agrees a tub of lard jumped into sdizzles gene pool
While hes a midget with glasses on trying to seem "cool"
Dumb
Fake jerseys dont phase me ive been a king for ages
To reach the keyboard he,gotta sit on the white AND yellow pages
It was ok
I should just stop right here, both you faggots are done
Chances are like anorexia becoming holy, slim to nun
This was really good. I liked it alot
Daz the slut, cum in his mouth and he takes it in the butt
how do i know this^^^? hes SO TIRED of chewing the nut
Dumb Closer
Overall 7/10
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Daz
These kids are walked over, after they're knocked in the street...
Is that wrong? i just wanted to keep Soc's on my feet...
Good play off the name
So what? your verses made me throw up so grow up..
Told Dizzle to go nuts...Ended with pizza, chips and donuts..
good flow with multi's and personal
Bad and tough? kid your just mad you suck..
And i'd use a Hall Of Shame line..But dizzle's just bad enough..
Another good line
Dudes Ur new to this your verses were stupid bitch...
I wanted to diss soc, but why waste time doing it?..
Filler. been said to dizzle
Soc just sucks, and dizzle is So-So...
but why complain about a league when you fucking no showed?
Not a hard personal
Socs in my league too, Should retire chump...
Chuz i burn down these fags houses and had 'em all fired up...
dumb
and im a meanie son, no im not a nice dude..
When speaking of jokes, when all know this hoe's real...
And ur skill?please ur making mountains out of molehills....
Meanie? LMAO
Overall 7/10

1st. Daz
2nd. Socrates
15th. Sdizzle
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Old 10-22-04, 01:17 PM   #17
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lol @ these votes....

Daz won this battle
then soc then dizzle...between dizzle and soc
was pretty colse...daz wins, because i said so.

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Old 10-22-04, 03:40 PM   #18
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lol @ carson jets 15th

thats honeslty the funniest thing i saw in the battle

not being sarcastic, it actualy made me laugh

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Old 10-22-04, 03:46 PM   #19
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Im creative.
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Old 10-23-04, 08:53 AM   #20
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blah at this... all 3 verses were kinda young-minded... but dizzle definitely got this for his personals... dizzle 1, soc 2, daz 3

soc and daz were basically on the same level

soc best personals: there was only one if ya actually read the verse

You can brag about your posts and wins on RB
And i'll brag about how wife beaters ACTUALLY FIT ME

daz best personals: again, only one that stood out in the whole verse

Soc just sucks, and dizzle is So-So...
but why complain about a league when you fucking no showed?

dizzle best personals:there were a few here... surprisingly

now ur styles played out, and guess what dizzle just found
how you both lost last week, but still advanced to the next round


then daz comes to plate, i wont even check his battle last week
hes a mod on rb..... with 3/4 no-show's in his JUNIOR league

^^that one was the killer... for the record... i don't really think dizzle is good at this shyt but the facts are right there in black and white... all 3 can fix they structure a little, though
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Old 10-24-04, 04:02 AM   #21
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-Closed.

1st-Socrates
2nd-sdizzle
3rd-Daz

Socrates and sdizzle advance.
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