Battle Rules:

Fuck It.
you know the rules.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-31-08 at 03:03 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Young Kidd (LM) has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-28-08 03:15 PM.

J Summers has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-28-08 03:32 PM.

Shits Due At Midnight Tonight Sooooooooonnnnnnnnnn

__________________
southbeachmiamiho

yea i know lol. i just didnt change anything. it'll be in.

__________________
iGhostwrite Mixtape DL

YOU know aint nobody bout to vote...but fuck it anywho

__________________
southbeachmiamiho

www.soundclick.com/jsummers

called fuckin wit j summers

church you better post ya shit ho

__________________
southbeachmiamiho

http://www.zshare.net/audio/697405315bef75/

ahh. shit was rushed but here.

__________________
iGhostwrite Mixtape DL

Alright, beat ok. I dont know why you add choruses.

You sound like a little kid.

I hate all the 'like' lines. Bad parents line was the best since the chorus. Wow, and it ends. Once again you have ONE good line. Let's hope Young Kidd can beat that.

__________________
██â€-█████████▒▓▓▓▓▓▓▓██████▓▓▓▓██████████████████ ██↑
██‡████████▒▓▓█████▓▓██████▓▓▓█████████████▓▓▓██ ██|
██‡███████▒▓▓██████▓▓▓███████▓▓███████████▓▓█▓▓█ ██|
██‡███████████████▓▓▓▒███▌████▓▓█████████▓▓███▓▓ ██|
██‡█████████████▓▓▓▒████▌▌▌████▓▓███████▓▓████▓█ ██|
██‡███████████▓▓▓▒█████▌▌▌▌▌▄███▓▓█████▓▓███████ ██|
██‡█████████▓▓▓▒█████████████████▓▓███▓▓████████ ██|
██‡███████▓▓▓▓▒███████████████████▓▓█▓▓█████████ ██|
██‡███████▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▌████████████▓▓▓██████████ ██|

Feedback for Young Kidd:

Beat meh. LOL @ the quality, total shit. Get better equipment. Flow is blah. 1 Personal but not very hard. Michigan nobody raps? A lot of people from Michigan can rap, Detroit is in Michigan. And that nos shit. Alright, you tried to be personal, but no hard lines. Sorry Young Kidd.

vote goes to J Summers. No poll but the mod can count it.

Props for throwing down you two. peace.

__________________
██â€-█████████▒▓▓▓▓▓▓▓██████▓▓▓▓██████████████████ ██↑
██‡████████▒▓▓█████▓▓██████▓▓▓█████████████▓▓▓██ ██|
██‡███████▒▓▓██████▓▓▓███████▓▓███████████▓▓█▓▓█ ██|
██‡███████████████▓▓▓▒███▌████▓▓█████████▓▓███▓▓ ██|
██‡█████████████▓▓▓▒████▌▌▌████▓▓███████▓▓████▓█ ██|
██‡███████████▓▓▓▒█████▌▌▌▌▌▄███▓▓█████▓▓███████ ██|
██‡█████████▓▓▓▒█████████████████▓▓███▓▓████████ ██|
██‡███████▓▓▓▓▒███████████████████▓▓█▓▓█████████ ██|
██‡███████▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▌████████████▓▓▓██████████ ██|

^ lol yea. i figured the michigan line was shit. but i had to do the verse cuz i let my friend borrow my mic.

and my quality is fucked today.
i dunno why. shittt.
but thanks for the feed.

__________________
iGhostwrite Mixtape DL

Voted For: Young Kidd (LM)

YK yours was more simple, but it was more personal. Beat was alright.Lyrics was coo. J summers i think you needed 1 more verse to be honest, both was'nt too bad tho. Young Kidd jus took this 1 for me. VOTE= young Kidd

fucka personal .......dude did a background check on ya boi..

__________________
southbeachmiamiho

LOL nah. i just clicked view threads started by J Summers and just did like the first 10 lmao. shit took 5 mins. lol

__________________
iGhostwrite Mixtape DL

Voted For: J Summers

Young Kidd - To be honest man, your delivery isn't really consistant with a battle track. That Michigan line was kinda the opposite of a punch cause it made me think of another rapper from Michigan and the first one I thought of was one of the greatest, Eminem. Your quality was OK I guess. Fall line was used umpteen times against him. The avatar line wasn't bad. Nas line was OK, but wasn't really effective to me.

J Summers - This sounds more like a diss track to me. Punches were OK but not too many really directed at him. Not really much to critique though.

I gotta go with J Summers on this one cause his was just more enjoyable to me.

__________________