ok this is my first try...so keep that in mind...i have otha beats but they take so long to upload this is the only one so far on my page *shrugs* w/e

called: Ba Boom

i realize there is a crap section at like 1:17 but ima work to fix that....

so leave feed an ill return the favor

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ok ok... im the last person to be critiquesing people but.. it wasn't that bad, a little repetitive, but thats ok, a couple my beats are a lil repetitive.. like the guy sayin im the shit or wutever he was saying, so being it ur first beat, i give it a 7/10 for a first try www.soundclick.com/sdizzlerecords

This is really good, especially for a first try. That pizzicato string sounds off-key at times, though.

thnx a lot... yea a first try.... n e feed is worth havin

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uppy up up

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imma check this out right now... brb

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is that a tupac sample of him laughing?

anyways... the piano is gay. get rid of it or change the sound. the rest is pretty cool but it just sounds like 2 loops!!!

not bad for first time but you should take out the piano.

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laughing? theres no laughing on the track an yea it does get a bit repetative...an the piano was in to kinda soften it i guess u could say

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