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Old 01-25-04, 11:58 PM   #1
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Rhode (1-0) vs. Lethargic (4-0)

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Check in and agree on line amount
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Verses are due Friday 12:00pm CT
Must have post 3 links to votes in your check-in post
For ever link you are missing you get docked a vote
Matches will be closed Sunday night.
 
Old 01-26-04, 08:36 AM   #2
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Check

How Many? I assume you'll be showing since RnR is down?

EDIT: Do I have to add links...I think I've voted on every battle in LLL.

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Old 01-27-04, 01:52 AM   #3
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about fourteen, give or take two.
 
Old 01-30-04, 02:31 AM   #4
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No shakin or speech impediments when I'm mockin this former champ..
Cuz when Rhode gets caught in this wreckage, there's no exit or off-ramp!
Damn, you fell off man...No showin on RnR...a sign, or a hidden blessin?
Well, regardless of what it is, I'm cuttin him off at his innersections
Braggin on past wins...Dude....no one gives a fuck, see?
A punk with dreams..
.....Shattered by punches flyin India more than Asian Countries
This flunkies, shit needs to be outlawed...I'd contest it with litigation
And was tempted to drop a wack verse, when I took his sig in consideration
So duck this bitch, you chicken shit...I'm shreddin this pheasant's keys
When I rape him in every manner...before I murder his pleasantries
Think your the best? Please...I'm about to bid you a-due..so Fare-well
So keep braggin about Past W's...cuz you'll never be able to grab this L
 
Old 01-30-04, 08:52 AM   #5
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^ There must be a circus in town.

Listen..
Leth got so much bitchin in his verse, I`m not impressed
I`m still waitin for the lipstick to appear with high heels N dress
Its off with your kneck, your creativity clearly isnt a survivor
So I`ll drive over all of your Rhode lines.. like a drunken driver
The dopeness supplier.. I`ll kill u, if u ever say that i wont win
Turn u to a ghost, have ur Shadow dis-appearing like the old admin
You need to hit the gym, pathetic little fuck.. but whats worse
You could work out at home,
with dumb bars.. all you have to do is pick up your verse
Get left in a herse, after this battle.. so - your dead clown
Cause we're both pickin up an L
your taking the loss.. I`m liftin you, then slammin u to the ground

This whole verse was keyed, because you suck
............I dont give a fuck
so you dont get my best lines, instead you get...

two middle fingers up.
 
Old 01-30-04, 08:54 AM   #6
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if you wanna see me on full blast, come to the WA.

you know where it is Leth.. goodluck kid.
 
Old 01-30-04, 01:05 PM   #7
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ummm whats a dumb bar...i know what i dumb bell is, but whats a dumb bar...

yea anyways...
leth...good verse but i think you OD'd on the Rhode/rode/street/lane etc lines...punches were good
i didnt get the indian line

rhode. ... the shadow line was pretty nice
sides that, all your concepts seemed like flips...yea

vote Leth
 
Old 01-30-04, 04:39 PM   #8
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Rhode.
if you wanna see me on full blast, come to the WA.

you know where it is Leth.. goodluck kid.


Word. I'm already in it. Gl to you as well.
 
Old 01-30-04, 05:18 PM   #9
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V/ Rhode

Lethargic...wasn't feelin much outta ur verse...a lot of forced wordplay..punches weren't too great either...anyways..an average verse

Rhode...Rhode's always been dope..it does look like a key...lol@there must be a circus in town...anyways..Road line was dope..shadow line was coo...Rhode was more consistent...overall..good verse

vote doesnt count ... not in league.

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Old 01-30-04, 09:20 PM   #10
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Token ... The India line was the battles dopest probably.
heres what it meant:
Shattered by punches flyin India more than Asian Countries
India = Into you, (pronounce India.. In da ya)

No shakin or speech impediments when I'm mockin this former champ..
Cuz when Rhode gets caught in this wreckage, there's no exit or off-ramp!
nah .
Damn, you fell off man...No showin on RnR...a sign, or a hidden blessin?
Well, regardless of what it is, I'm cuttin him off at his innersections
meh.
Braggin on past wins...Dude....no one gives a fuck, see?
A punk with dreams..
.....Shattered by punches flyin India more than Asian Countries
dope, nice, job.
This flunkies, shit needs to be outlawed...I'd contest it with litigation
And was tempted to drop a wack verse, when I took his sig in consideration
lol, nice punch ...
So duck this bitch, you chicken shit...I'm shreddin this pheasant's keys
When I rape him in every manner...before I murder his pleasantries
no.
Think your the best? Please...I'm about to bid you a-due..so Fare-well
So keep braggin about Past W's...cuz you'll never be able to grab this L
hmm... if theres a punch here i dont get it...

overall / Reading the filler didnt bother me much.. what did was the "rhode" lines... But the two dope bars outshined the rest basically..pretty good verse, worth my time reading..

Leth got so much bitchin in his verse, I`m not impressed
I`m still waitin for the lipstick to appear with high heels N dress
nice
Its off with your kneck, your creativity clearly isnt a survivor
So I`ll drive over all of your Rhode lines.. like a drunken driver
nah .
The dopeness supplier.. I`ll kill u, if u ever say that i wont win
Turn u to a ghost, have ur Shadow dis-appearing like the old admin
played
You need to hit the gym, pathetic little fuck.. but whats worse
You could work out at home,
with dumb bars.. all you have to do is pick up your verse
played
Get left in a herse, after this battle.. so - your dead clown
Cause we're both pickin up an L
your taking the loss.. I`m liftin you, then slammin u to the ground
not that good.

rhode, you half assed it here, or quarter assed it, or completely blew out the ass... i think you know what you did wrong. Try next time. maybe your dope enough to own this league, but not without trying...

v/ leth
 
Old 01-31-04, 02:50 PM   #11
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feeble, i strongly disagree with you here.

the drunken driver line basically, just outshined
lethargic's entire verse. you overrused that concept
waaaaaaaay too much. it sucked after a while
just same shit same shit ..

rhode won w/ creativity.

good battle. .

werd. its cool. 2-1 leth. -feebz

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Old 01-31-04, 04:56 PM   #12
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Rhode had a good verse...I'm just tired of seein people say I played out the topic with only 2 lines directed at his name.
 
Old 01-31-04, 08:12 PM   #13
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Vote = Leth.

I was talking to Leth the other day, he knows what I thought of his verse. I'll just quickly say it here too. He started off nice with his initial punches... but he fell off towards the end. I agree with Sand. The drunken drivers line by Rhode was witty and made me laugh. However, that was the only punch that really stood out in Rhode's verse. So this vote goes to Leth cuz he had more than one good punch.
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Old 01-31-04, 11:18 PM   #14
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lethargic: your beginnings were nice and i was really feeling some of hte wordplay, but near the end few bars i wasn't feling it was much

rhode: pretty nice, but not as many peaks or hard hitting punches,b ut you did have more consistency and your wordplay and pucnhes were just a little worse tha leths' but you came more consitent

v/rhode

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Old 02-01-04, 10:40 AM   #15
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Since when did we not count votes in the league? I can go back to past weeks were they were allowed. Its whatever, a half assed verses anyhow.

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