~* The Past*~

We was together 1 year and 6 months
We used to be love but I guess happiness wasn’t fa us
We argued and fought every day
I’m still askin my self why I stayed
I stayed until the time ya laid a hand on me
You promised me on day 1 that ya would never hit me
But I guess ya don’t remember because you did the opposite
You even bought me an $800 bracelet
Then you askin me why I left you
There was no way I could stay with you after all we been through
Once I started high school year
All the fightin got worse it became some tears
I couldn’t take the controlling and abuse
Getting through to you was no use
I had to leave, it was un healthy
I’ve had issues wit me bein not hungry
I went from being 110 to being 92
That aint my grade average I’m talking bout my weight which was caused by you
I broke away afta all the pain
It was new feelin for me, I didn’t have the feelin of restrain
I took some time off from boys
People telling me to forget you like a background noise
I aint gon’ lie I still love you
But there no way that there gon’ be a two
Afta some time I found someone new
I knew he was the type to stay true
He was dedicated from day one
From then on I knew our relationship was done

~* The Present *~

Me and mah baby been in love for almost a year
We’ve been through hell and back wit a couple of tears
And in the process I realized you found the true me
I found the true you we got the compatable personality
Let me explain a compel of things
My love for him blossoms like a flower that sings
Every time I think of you my body becomes light
Like an angel gave me wings but it’s your love givin me flight
I’d fight for you, die for you, always there to ride wit you
Fly any land, swim any sea to be wit you
Baby we’ve been through a lot but to live I need you

Originally Posted by Wordz Ahgod I wont get deep into coz Im tired but like it. Its got good emotion and you stick well to concept and feelings. you just need to be more creative with whats going on. you really speed through it in each lines so theres always something new going on. drop a line on like the setting or something. make like a story and try to get the readers really into it and it'll be hot. 1