can i throw this in here to
and maybe get a review...

here's a surprise for your mutha fuckin eyes
i will flip this shit so you can realize
C.M.F.S. is here and we're in the house
been through the test of fear i know what it's bout
i'm not crazy but i'm here to stay
and thats when i'd like to introduce you to ray
here he is and the boy's he brings
give him the mic and watch how he sings
i'm a crazy mutha fucker from outta town
come step the fuck up and i will knock you down
i'm not fuckin around and if you have any doubt
come across the line i will knock you out
heres what i'm worth i'm walkin the earth
tryin to find, a nice place in the dirt so
i can lay down and rest for a while
and then i'll get up and i will show you my style
in the meantime i should say meanwhile
i'll hand you back to the son of survival
yo it's back to me and i'm here to stay
thanks for the words from my homie ray
hope that he will come up to the top one day
what about that ray whatta' ya say

ah man it's not the life for me
i'd rather stay at home and
smoke a pound of weed
i like to be alone with some hydro P
you know me i'm just a fuckin G

1st verses are always the worsest
i know that i'm under the lyrical curses
mutha fuckers all around tryin to give me the urges
and i'm risin up with all these miracle surges
when i bust this shit straght from the top
and become the king of mutha fuckin hip hop
and you know all that cool calm collected bullshit
fuck all of that it's all about all this and
and all of that too and and everything else
it's all about rhymin and all of yourselvses
it's all about drivin till the hour of twelve
wakin up in the mornin to the sound of the bells
back to work to earn your dollars and cents
all of you fools lost in the moment
peek hour traffic it's gotta be bitchin
fuck it with all that it's time to get itchin
and rise to the top of all of existance
like the time that we kicked it, take that for instance
i know you can do it man, give up the resistance
what about now ray whatta ya thinkin
next time you see me, i'll be the one in the distance
gonna come up here where your shit wont be stinkin

ah man it's not the life for me
i'd rather stay at home and
smoke a pound of weed
i like to be alone with some hydro P
you know me i'm just a fuckin G

i know that you got it ray i know you can spit it
give him the mic now and watch how he rips it
spigity spac and fuck all that crap
give him the stage he knows where it's at
open the cage man your shit isn't wack
release all that rage dawg lay down that cold rap
ok i'm back jack gimme the mic i rap
all day and night ya know i bust a rhyme and flow
when i started out there was no motion
now i'm on the beach gettin covered in lotion
at home most days, drinkin rum, smokin jays
i sit on my bum i'm the king of all ray's
i gotta say thanks to my homie there stace
he's the one who got me into this place
yes you too mum, and all of hip hop
for helpin me drag my fuckin ass to the top
i hand the shit back now, to the one and the only
the one who can bust it, the one who can show me
yeah that's right you got the shit down now
gimme the mic and go take a bow
pick up your shit we'll head back to to town
one last wave to the mutha fukin crowd

ah man this is the life for me
we still stay at home and
smoke a pound of weed
we're still gettin stoned on the hydro P
you and me and the rest of the G's

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yo not bad at all ecspecially for as rookie i was def feelin it keep it comin can u hit up these battles in my sig....

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yeah man thanx for the feedback the audio sux a bit tho
i'm gonna do another one soon
hit me up bro tho i don't know how to post those battle linx ho'
nice work by you all round i hit you up against that 1000 lines clown

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