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Old 04-01-03, 11:39 AM   #1
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why would i-how could i

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why would i--how could i
imagine a world of love hope and dreams that come true
why would i--how could i
dream of givin my heart my soul to you
why would i--how could i
smile today when tomorrow is only pain not yet revealed
why would i--how could i
open my heart to you when your intentions are still concealed
why would i--how could i
think that things are different-that im someone not no one
why would i--how could i
crawl from bed knowing that i wont be loved by anyone
why would i--how could i
think that because i extend my hand to you that you'll reach to me
why would i--how could i
see things, feel things know things that no one else can see
why would i--how could i
forget you and how you touched my heart my body my soul
why would i--how could i
not want to caress your gentle body until our future lives unfold
why would i--how could i
i wouldnt...i shouldnt...but i will
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Old 04-01-03, 02:15 PM   #2
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daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamnn....i liked d way u structured it....nice poem....

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Old 04-05-03, 07:14 PM   #3
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uppin
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Old 04-06-03, 12:32 AM   #4
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i agree...structure was too tiyte...
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Old 04-06-03, 07:18 PM   #5
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thanks....uppin
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Old 04-07-03, 11:00 AM   #6
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WHOA!!

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yo that was some deep shit i liked tha way u set it up...it felt like i was writin dat shit man i feel tha same way dawg i like when me and other ppl can relate on other shit...but yea yo keep droppin...
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Old 04-09-03, 01:10 PM   #7
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The meaning was deep. I like how it pointed everything out. Keep droppin'

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