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04-01-03, 11:39 AM | #1 | |||||||
The Real American Idol
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why would i-how could i
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why would i--how could i
imagine a world of love hope and dreams that come true why would i--how could i dream of givin my heart my soul to you why would i--how could i smile today when tomorrow is only pain not yet revealed why would i--how could i open my heart to you when your intentions are still concealed why would i--how could i think that things are different-that im someone not no one why would i--how could i crawl from bed knowing that i wont be loved by anyone why would i--how could i think that because i extend my hand to you that you'll reach to me why would i--how could i see things, feel things know things that no one else can see why would i--how could i forget you and how you touched my heart my body my soul why would i--how could i not want to caress your gentle body until our future lives unfold why would i--how could i i wouldnt...i shouldnt...but i will
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04-01-03, 02:15 PM | #2 | |||||||
Tampons are expensive
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daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamnn....i liked d way u structured it....nice poem....
HEAD UP!
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04-05-03, 07:14 PM | #3 | |||||||
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uppin
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04-06-03, 12:32 AM | #4 | ||||||
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i agree...structure was too tiyte...
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04-06-03, 07:18 PM | #5 | |||||||
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thanks....uppin
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04-07-03, 11:00 AM | #6 | ||||||
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WHOA!!
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yo that was some deep shit i liked tha way u set it up...it felt like i was writin dat shit man i feel tha same way dawg i like when me and other ppl can relate on other shit...but yea yo keep droppin...
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04-09-03, 01:10 PM | #7 | ||||||
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The meaning was deep. I like how it pointed everything out. Keep droppin'
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