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Old 12-09-04, 04:07 PM   #1
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3. R-Rated Vs. 62. Current

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Battles open Friday Night At 12:00 AM Eastern Time
Check-Ins Due By Sunday At 12:00 AM Eastern Time
Verse's Due By Tuesday At 12:00 AM Eastern Time
Voting Ends Thursday At 12:00 Am Eastern Time

10 Lines
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The Person With The Most Votes By The Deadline Wins

If You Break Any Of These Rules Including The Line Limit You Will Be Eliminated From The Tourney!

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Old 12-10-04, 08:36 PM   #2
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Mirror-Mode Mupucka!

~R~
 
Old 12-11-04, 12:45 PM   #3
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checking in.
pze.
 
Old 12-13-04, 11:59 PM   #4
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its common logic b, that you wont be stopping me/
shit.. Curr/Kerr's best known for dropping threes/
competition's neck & neck, i state the real man/
his' like a tortoise .. mines more like a giraffe/
r-rated is just one, ugly whore, and whats more/
your jaw jets out so far ..
you can see pennington & moss connect for a score/
this nigga spits like a ho. ya so damn wack yo/
..that you got fired on stage, like dimebag darrel/
bye bitch, you got a chance? dont lie snitch/
..i have an eye for talent, you're the i inside it/
 
Old 12-14-04, 03:45 PM   #5
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Just Fall Back, Your Pushing No Weight..Shit Kid Ya Worthless..
And Your Peers Have Been Embarrased, Ever Since Ya Birth Bitch..
Honesty Hurts, Too Late Your Merked No Time To Elevate..
Plus My Mental Punches Connect With Force To Make You Levitate..
Featherweight, Feminine Muphucka No Business Fucking Wita Mic..
Transvestite CrossDresser, Tucked In Dick Just So He Can Fuck Wita Dike..
Rated Will Cave In Your Dome, So Deep That Bats Will Begin To Nest..
Pussy-At-Heart, Kid Must Have Hybrid Cats Indepth Beneath His Chest..
I'll Spit On A Mic, Puncture Ya Torso and Knock 13 of Ya Veterbraes Outta Place..
They'll Say Rateds Shooting Rockets, How I'm Knocking Ya Body Into Outta Space..

Blah...10 Lines.

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Old 12-14-04, 03:55 PM   #6
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current wtf is this WACK ass shit, does not even make sense...... jesus u suck
GJ r-rated!! lol
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Old 12-16-04, 05:24 PM   #7
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basically im not even gonna break this battle down cuz it was wack... current wtf was that it was really weak... you had maybe one good punch but besides that you had nothing.. structure was ok your rhyme scheme was terrible.... wasnt anything that really stood out

overall : 3.5/10

r-rated:

you werent too dope either if this is how good youre gonna be for the rest of the tourney you might as well sign out now.... because that verse was just wack you had good wordplay and maybe 2 good punches but besides that your verse was wack

overall : 5.5/10

vote: r-rated
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Old 12-16-04, 06:49 PM   #8
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Current:
its common logic b, that you wont be stopping me/
shit.. Curr/Kerr's best known for dropping threes/
wack
competition's neck & neck, i state the real man/
his' like a tortoise .. mines more like a giraffe/
ummm no
r-rated is just one, ugly whore, and whats more/
your jaw jets out so far ..
you can see pennington & moss connect for a score/
ok, only decent punch
this nigga spits like a ho. ya so damn wack yo/
..that you got fired on stage, like dimebag darrel/
no
bye bitch, you got a chance? dont lie snitch/
..i have an eye for talent, you're the i inside it/
wtf?? not even a punch

Rated:
Just Fall Back, Your Pushing No Weight..Shit Kid Ya Worthless..
And Your Peers Have Been Embarrased, Ever Since Ya Birth Bitch..
blah
Honesty Hurts, Too Late Your Merked No Time To Elevate..
Plus My Mental Punches Connect With Force To Make You Levitate..
this was "ok"
Featherweight, Feminine Muphucka No Business Fucking Wita Mic..
Transvestite CrossDresser, Tucked In Dick Just So He Can Fuck Wita Dike..
lol a little better
Rated Will Cave In Your Dome, So Deep That Bats Will Begin To Nest..
Pussy-At-Heart, Kid Must Have Hybrid Cats Indepth Beneath His Chest..
ok
I'll Spit On A Mic, Puncture Ya Torso and Knock 13 of Ya Veterbraes Outta Place..
They'll Say Rateds Shooting Rockets, How I'm Knocking Ya Body Into Outta Space..
good closer

V/Rated
 
Old 12-16-04, 09:34 PM   #9
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Voting Is Now Over... R-Rated Wins 2-0
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