Very good imagery and "storytelling". I enjoyed this piece and the impact it had, the realization that the person had of themselves was off the chain. Keep it up, great work..9.9 outta 10.

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Damn Got Fifteen Responses And Want More Now That's Just Straight Up Greedy Home Anyway It Was A Nice Post

thanks for the feed people u may now sleep......unless ur nice then post like crazy

Dope shyt..
You used nyce vocab, and the piece flowed well.
I liked the concept..

If anything, I think this line coulda been worded better:
to stop her everlasting excruciating sadness

I kinda foresaw the end comin out to be like that but still dope.. 8/10, stay up.

THANKS MAN appreciate it^^^still uppin fa sho

damn playa it was real good great keystyle...alot of emotion, creativity, strucutre on point, vocab on point, & evathang in between keep writing i like it

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haha thanks man much appreciated dudde^^ still uppin for more feed

really short i was feelin it just if it was longer it woulda been more enjoyable, your flow was good, stucture was good, imagery was nice a lil bit random but mostly mine is random. theres nothin bad about that either, vocabulary was alright coulda been a lil bit more upped but overall i was feelin this. good job
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^^Thanks man really appreciate all the feeback......still uppin of course

Yo man this was off da chain in the emotional part man......so emotional had me thinkin u was gothic lol....anyways flow and vocab was on point man......Keep it commin....and keep elevatin....This had me imagine shit so keep doin ya thang and dont let no haters w/e haters that hatin get to ya

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^^im feelin that fo real man feelin the love................still uppin and yo yung dolla get at me for a collab kid.......we gots to do one.....uppin