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Check in by: 08-21-05 at 05:46 AM

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-UNF- has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-05 06:01 AM.

Leavin You Torched-And-Finished, Scorched, With Your Corpse-Diminished
I Can Only Afford-A-Minute, So Im Gonna "Kill You From The Start", Like "Abortion-Clinics"
"MaRVJay" is a gimmick...This Faggot needs to just leave and let me just win it
Just Admit It My Flow's Just Infinite, You Told Me To "Set and Spit" So I'm "Rippin This Cunt", I Can Tell-That-Ya-Sunk
Fuck It, Im Expellin-This-Punk! Cause Ya "Lips Bring In More Nuts" Than An "Elephants-Trunk"
"Light Ya Up" Like A "Blunt", I'll "Stunt On This Runt", "Open You Up Like A Present" With My Lyrical Presence
Cause Facin Me's Like "Dieing In Jail", Your "Dead Before The End Of Your Sentence"
Slaughtering Peasents, Ya Rhymes Aint Worth A Pot To-Piss-In, You Try-To-Glisten But No One Wants-To-Listen
Have You Spittin And Missin, Throwin Lines Aimlessly At Me Like Youre Stevie Wonder-Fishing
So Maybe after this battle MaRVJay will have learned
Cause all I did was cough on em and he had 3rd degree burns

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uppin for MaRVJay1009 to check in n drop!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-18-05 12:05 PM.

uppin fo marv to drop ...............................

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uppin for u to drop............................................

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dropiing yet???????????????????????????????????????????

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pardon da wait fam......

i aint gota get real lyrical 2 get at u,14 wins off mc's dat pitful.
no girl a have sex with u..guess datz y ya name was a un-fuck-witabul.
every mc in trigga town is a clown! & u mad cuzz im destine 4 more shyne.
and u just a "aol traveler" datz gon see "america-online"
how mc's like u brag?,nah i dont need a beat da write 2 fag.
neva get famous u couldn't "head-lines" if u were a "tight durag".
hi hater!...nah fam u not on my level so dont think i hate ya.
but da only time "pussy a have a buzz" its gon be a "vibrator".
i mean dis nigga im da meanest.......and your just a penis.
put ya "brain on ya pants" so u can really be a "JEaN-iUS".

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^^he's scared.lol

damn good shit here yo both good verses but shit man for real -UNF- killed it with the multi's and shit

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~*~Operation Take Over~*~

WhAt EvEr It TaKeS

Voted For: -UNF-

UNFUCKWIDABLE: MaRVJay" is a gimmick...This Faggot needs to just leave and let me just win it
Just Admit It My Flow's Just Infinite, You Told Me To "Set and Spit" So I'm "Rippin This Cunt

This one really caught my eye seein from what you did a while ago then seein this verse youve' improved with your lyrics and got more personal at your oppenent

keep it up

Marvjay: i mean dis nigga im da meanest.......and your just a penis.
put ya "brain on ya pants" so u can really be a "JEaN-iUS".

i thought this line was pretty good but you had some personals but just need to improve on usin them

overall vote: unf

but good job to both of you

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Voted For: -UNF-

i aint gota get real lyrical 2 get at u,14 wins off mc's dat pitful.
no girl a have sex with u..guess datz y ya name was a un-fuck-witabul.
a personal but it was wack
every mc in trigga town is a clown! & u mad cuzz im destine 4 more shyne.
and u just a "aol traveler" datz gon see "america-online"
first line truth secon line wack
how mc's like u brag?,nah i dont need a beat da write 2 fag.
neva get famous u couldn't "head-lines" if u were a "tight durag".
wow this was ook i guess
hi hater!...nah fam u not on my level so dont think i hate ya.
but da only time "pussy a have a buzz" its gon be a "vibrator".
most played concept it was jsut wack
i mean dis nigga im da meanest.......and your just a penis.
put ya "brain on ya pants" so u can really be a "JEaN-iUS".
ok but the set up was horrible could have been worded better
overall up ur vocabu need better personals ur best line was the one about tti lol but this wasnt a very good battle

Leavin You Torched-And-Finished, Scorched, With Your Corpse-Diminished
I Can Only Afford-A-Minute, So Im Gonna "Kill You From The Start", Like "Abortion-Clinics"
no personal but it was a good line
"MaRVJay" is a gimmick...This Faggot needs to just leave and let me just win it
Just Admit It My Flow's Just Infinite, You Told Me To "Set and Spit" this was ur worst line in my opinion
So I'm "Rippin This Cunt", I Can Tell-That-Ya-Sunk
Fuck It, Im Expellin-This-Punk! Cause Ya "Lips Bring In More Nuts" Than An "Elephants-Trunk" this was kinda played but it was funny lol
"Light Ya Up" Like A "Blunt", I'll "Stunt On This Runt", "Open You Up Like A Present" With My Lyrical Presence
Cause Facin Me's Like "Dieing In Jail", Your "Dead Before The End Of Your Sentence" good line
Slaughtering Peasents, Ya Rhymes Aint Worth A Pot To-Piss-In, You Try-To-Glisten But No One Wants-To-Listen
Have You Spittin And Missin, Throwin Lines Aimlessly At Me Like Youre Stevie Wonder-Fishing
lol played concept but it was mad funny
So Maybe after this battle MaRVJay will have learned
Cause all I did was cough on em and he had 3rd degree burns
not a good closer

overall u need to up ur vocab work on personals and ur structure for text battles ur structure isnt that good really that stevie wonder line was hillarious lmao i think u should do audio reading ur stuff it seems like u ave good flow

ok battle to both of u u both lacked personals though but props to both both of u work on creativity

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Voted For: -UNF-

this was close yo...but this dude got this...cos he had more vocab stuffed in therre...punches kept on hittin and mets were more decent...marv u seemed to be forcin punches but they ended up bein soft...dude the way u present ur verse is much more better but this isnt ur usual style of ripin in battles i guess?...anyways unf all u gatta do bro is try ta make ur verse a lil more presentable and yeah i cant leave out that u had ok multiz in there too...both did i nice job as 4 me...but this unf had the right aim and just keps on throin punches at the right spot...

holla at mine with honest votes yo...ty

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cant vote on your battle wid rob we in same crew tell us a diff battle thx for the vote

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OYD MAFIA