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Old , 12:10 AM   #12
Trauma
Picture This......
 
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Lyricle Disciple vs LyricleSolja

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Topical:Sun Rise

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Lyriclesolja
 
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Yo as my eyes get tired my feet make it hard to walk,
I can barely step now let alone speak & talk,
I see in slow motion-communication is bare,
Speech all around me-the people will stare,
Words surround me talk to me if you dare,
Fore where i am bound-my bed i am finially there,
Slowly but surely ma covers will warm,
From the cold air-a hard breeze-the storm,
As i slowly slip into great dreams,
Filled with passed members and things,
Then the dream slowly dies,
And my sore eyes meet the graceful sun rise.
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Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.
 
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Trauma
 
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As I Lay Wide Awake Into The Break Of Don I Then Realize,
The Beautiful Sun Rise, The Horizon Light Up Before My Eyes
As The Sun Sweeps The Floor Room Like An Old Dusty Broom
Thy Skies Light Up As My Windows Fulfill Itself With Gloom
Reflection Of Orange Stain My Wall With Colors Of White Light
Complexions Of Flowers Dove's Are Nice, It Keeps Getting Bright
Dust On My Floor Lights Up As The Light Shines Over A Dove
The Eye In The Skies Of Clouds As The Sun Reaches A-Bove
The Sky And Horiz-on Appeals My Eyes And Pink Is Sligh-ten
As The.....Light-in The Sun Suddenly Glooms And Bright-ens.
The Amusement Seams Un--Confusing Cuzz Of The Suns Shape
As I Once More Gape At The Open Gates Opening Up My Fate
Isn't Ironic How The Suns Shape Is The Look Of A Girls Bottom
And At The Same Time In The Cold.....It'll Still Get Hotter(Hotta)
As The Space Clears There Is No Trace Of The Sun Rise Here
And The Clouds Go Back, And The Gloom Of Light Dissapears
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