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Old 03-09-09, 08:50 AM   #1
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Old 03-09-09, 12:00 PM   #2
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Check...sup bob :]
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Old 03-12-09, 09:27 PM   #4
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lol look who it is! whats good man?
take this 16 real quick..


bleed from your mouth, layered red and thin, gasp and spit
punching the film from this bastards lips...
.......................like I'm watching an axeshun flick!
blast your head, cause this trill OG's skull i'm bashing
pretending your ill, like you don't force a southern accent
I've swung these axes, disfiguring this kid with inert verbs
I skin cat's alive, so I don't give a fuck what you purr fur
i'm high and damn yo.. you ain't close to niching dope flows
I just know you no showed more times than I've hit the homegrown!
your spitting so so, punches with the effects of laughing badly
bitch I'll stab your daddy, feed him to Japs and call it calamari
I'd have to slap these heads if they said your spitting excellent
piles of your punches are broken, considered in da wrecked shit
my intellect grips, holding heads that hide facts, go and try axe
but flaunt your quote percent and get smacked with a pie graph
I'm psychic, and guess what? I can foresee where your text leads...
writing wack, and your name is the type of match your in next week!
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Old 03-13-09, 03:40 AM   #5
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okay bob the builder...16 it is.



The stories i heard about your flow is true, you'll never be over great
So when i beat u to a pulp like my orange juice, it'll still have the bolder taste
Don't act like you got an ovation for anything, cuz u aint got shit to appluad
With lines so pussy, you're verse look like they might develop whiskers & paws
I used to fucks with you bob, but now you're just the common hater
I'll drop a comment later, about how we only refer to ur name as a commentator
I bring the drama, you can tell I don't show mercy to my enemies holmes
Axe have u laying on the ground with broken legs: just to say ur injury prone
I'm bbbb-bad to the bone, don't act like you all of a sudden a baller cunt
Cuz my lines could stand out more than urs, even if i used a smaller font
Ya taste is horrific, I mean if you thought Bob was anywhere near relavent
Obviously been the carbon copy of Chrit, took him way out of his element
I out way u in any measurement, the old wordplay? wtf would u do without it?
Nothing, becuz u have so little flow...they can't even measure u in fluid ounces
See it's nice to see someone try and match up, but still aint vicious as me
But its too many fish in the sea..
So when u plan harbor victory, I'll be there to sink ya intentions with ease


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Old 03-13-09, 05:06 AM   #6
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bleed from your mouth, layered red and thin, gasp and spit
punching the film from this bastards lips...
.......................like I'm watching an axeshun flick!
didn't like it. It felt too forced, specially since his name is axeshun/action nah mean. Its the most simplest and easiest thing to come up with man.
blast your head, cause this trill OG's skull i'm bashing
pretending your ill, like you don't force a southern accent
didn't see a punch
I've swung these axes, disfiguring this kid with inert verbs
I skin cat's alive, so I don't give a fuck what you purr fur
This was a really weak wordplay man, and the wording made it sound way too forced.
i'm high and damn yo.. you ain't close to niching dope flows
I just know you no showed more times than I've hit the homegrown!
This wasn't a punch either.
your spitting so so, punches with the effects of laughing badly
bitch I'll stab your daddy, feed him to Japs and call it calamari
Dont even know what this was, saw multies but no actual punch in sight.
I'd have to slap these heads if they said your spitting excellent
piles of your punches are broken, considered in da wrecked shit
no punch
my intellect grips, holding heads that hide facts, go and try axe
but flaunt your quote percent and get smacked with a pie graph
I liked the concept and it could have been dope but your setup line didn't have any sort of relivency that you could have used to make this a hard hitting punch. Good try though, best punch so far in your verse.
I'm psychic, and guess what? I can foresee where your text leads...
writing wack, and your name is the type of match your in next week!
Nice, I like this nameplay and the wording felt more on point along with your setup and execution.

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The stories i heard about your flow is true, you'll never be over great
So when i beat u to a pulp like my orange juice, it'll still have the bolder taste
okish
Don't act like you got an ovation for anything, cuz u aint got shit to appluad
With lines so pussy, you're verse look like they might develop whiskers & paws
played
I used to fucks with you bob, but now you're just the common hater
I'll drop a comment later, about how we only refer to ur name as a commentator
nah, not a good nameplay, like the attempt though.
I bring the drama, you can tell I don't show mercy to my enemies holmes
Axe have u laying on the ground with broken legs: just to say ur injury prone
Seen this concept way back, stretched wording makes it not as effective but still an ok punch
I'm bbbb-bad to the bone, don't act like you all of a sudden a baller cunt
Cuz my lines could stand out more than urs, even if i used a smaller font
wording sucked.
Ya taste is horrific, I mean if you thought Bob was anywhere near relavent
Obviously been the carbon copy of Chrit, took him way out of his element
Okish
I out way u in any measurement, the old wordplay? wtf would u do without it?
Nothing, becuz u have so little flow...they can't even measure u in fluid ounces
okish
See it's nice to see someone try and match up, but still aint vicious as me
But its too many fish in the sea..
So when u plan harbor victory, I'll be there to sink ya intentions with ease
nah, too forced

Well, this one wasn't a completely onesided battle because Bob had that one dope nameplay line that I liked but Multi had more consistantly okish lines. As well all know, consistancy will win you a battle vs one or two dope lines. If Bob would have had one more line that would have thought were as good as his last too lines then he would have gotten the vote on this one but as it stands based on consistancy...

V/Multi.
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bleed from your mouth, layered red and thin, gasp and spit
punching the film from this bastards lips...
.......................like I'm watching an axeshun flick!
I'm psychic, and guess what? I can foresee where your text leads...
writing wack, and your name is the type of match your in next week!

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Ya taste is horrific, I mean if you thought Bob was anywhere near relavent
Obviously been the carbon copy of Chrit, took him way out of his element


rofl man. I've got bob taking this. seriously this battle feels rushed to hell. axe had that one punch referencing chrit which I liked.. I may be biased because I think Chrit is a fat shit who is still sore that I beat him way back. anyway, it was a solid hit. but bob had that nameplay which was ok and the multi shit nameplay flipped into a swagger punch was cool to.

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Old 03-13-09, 10:29 AM   #8
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bleed from your mouth, layered red and thin, gasp and spit
punching the film from this bastards lips...
.......................like I'm watching an axeshun flick!
I've swung these axes, disfiguring this kid with inert verbs
I skin cat's alive, so I don't give a fuck what you purr fur
I'm psychic, and guess what? I can foresee where your text leads...
writing wack, and your name is the type of match your in next week!



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Don't act like you got an ovation for anything, cuz u aint got shit to appluad
With lines so pussy, you're verse look like they might develop whiskers & paws
I'm bbbb-bad to the bone, don't act like you all of a sudden a baller cunt
Cuz my lines could stand out more than urs, even if i used a smaller font
Ya taste is horrific, I mean if you thought Bob was anywhere near relavent
Obviously been the carbon copy of Chrit, took him way out of his element


eh pretty close battle. both had solid verses. I have 3 quotes from each of you
like nick said bob had the good nameplays. And alot of them, whereas multi just had a more consistent verse. With a few harsher punches n my opinion


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Old 03-13-09, 11:39 AM   #9
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words just so you know, you overlooked alot of my shit.
the 1st bar axeshun wasnt the nameplay, its just his name..
the wp was for "film" which got a double meaning

and where you said "no punch" under my 6th bar
in da wrecked shit/indirect shit, so the punch is there
however strong you may think it is
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Old 03-13-09, 04:19 PM   #10
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bleed from your mouth, layered red and thin, gasp and spit
punching the film from this bastards lips...
.......................like I'm watching an axeshun flick!
this was ok, I wasnt loving it though
blast your head, cause this trill OG's skull i'm bashing
pretending your ill, like you don't force a southern accent
na
I've swung these axes, disfiguring this kid with inert verbs
I skin cat's alive, so I don't give a fuck what you purr fur
this was ok, worded bad though
i'm high and damn yo.. you ain't close to niching dope flows
I just know you no showed more times than I've hit the homegrown!
na
your spitting so so, punches with the effects of laughing badly
bitch I'll stab your daddy, feed him to Japs and call it calamari
na, seems fillerish
I'd have to slap these heads if they said your spitting excellent
piles of your punches are broken, considered in da wrecked shit
not feeling
my intellect grips, holding heads that hide facts, go and try axe
but flaunt your quote percent and get smacked with a pie graph
not really a hard hitting punch
I'm psychic, and guess what? I can foresee where your text leads...
writing wack, and your name is the type of match your in next week!
this was also ok, a little forced to me though




The stories i heard about your flow is true, you'll never be over great
So when i beat u to a pulp like my orange juice, it'll still have the bolder taste
na, not feeling it
Don't act like you got an ovation for anything, cuz u aint got shit to appluad
With lines so pussy, you're verse look like they might develop whiskers & paws
definitly not
I used to fucks with you bob, but now you're just the common hater
I'll drop a comment later, about how we only refer to ur name as a commentator
looks like you just focused on ryhming here
I bring the drama, you can tell I don't show mercy to my enemies holmes
Axe have u laying on the ground with broken legs: just to say ur injury prone
not a realy hard punch, not set up well either
I'm bbbb-bad to the bone, don't act like you all of a sudden a baller cunt
Cuz my lines could stand out more than urs, even if i used a smaller font
this is weak and been used a lot
Ya taste is horrific, I mean if you thought Bob was anywhere near relavent
Obviously been the carbon copy of Chrit, took him way out of his element
this makes no sense to me, I suppose chrit is a dude who I have never heard of or did you mean christ, which still makes no sense to me
I out way u in any measurement, the old wordplay? wtf would u do without it?
Nothing, becuz u have so little flow...they can't even measure u in fluid ounces
na weak and basic
See it's nice to see someone try and match up, but still aint vicious as me
But its too many fish in the sea..
So when u plan harbor victory, I'll be there to sink ya intentions with ease
this was decent



Not a bad battle, I have bob taking it with more creativity and hits, I think multi came weak and basic, a lot of low level punches.
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words just so you know, you overlooked alot of my shit.
the 1st bar axeshun wasnt the nameplay, its just his name..
the wp was for "film" which got a double meaning

and where you said "no punch" under my 6th bar
in da wrecked shit/indirect shit, so the punch is there
however strong you may think it is


sorry man, its still weak sauce
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Old 03-14-09, 12:25 AM   #12
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bleed from your mouth, layered red and thin, gasp and spit
punching the film from this bastards lips...
.......................like I'm watching an axeshun flick!
I'm psychic, and guess what? I can foresee where your text leads...
writing wack, and your name is the type of match your in next week!

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Ya taste is horrific, I mean if you thought Bob was anywhere near relavent
Obviously been the carbon copy of Chrit, took him way out of his element

Vote - Bobericc. Wasn't a very good battle, but he won.
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bleed from your mouth, layered red and thin, gasp and spit
punching the film from this bastards lips...
.......................like I'm watching an axeshun flick!

Great opener, nice wordplay

blast your head, cause this trill OG's skull i'm bashing
pretending your ill, like you don't force a southern accent

LOL, this was cool

I've swung these axes, disfiguring this kid with inert verb
I skin cat's alive, so I don't give a fuck what you purr fur

this was cool because the purrfur line added a nice touch

i'm high and damn yo.. you ain't close to niching dope flows
I just know you no showed more times than I've hit the homegrown!

barely descent

your spitting so so, punches with the effects of laughing badly
bitch I'll stab your daddy, feed him to Japs and call it calamari

barely descent

I'd have to slap these heads if they said your spitting excellent
piles of your punches are broken, considered in da wrecked shit


barely descent

my intellect grips, holding heads that hide facts, go and try axe
but flaunt your quote percent and get smacked with a pie graph

LMFAO, this was the best punch...


I'm psychic, and guess what? I can foresee where your text leads...
writing wack, and your name is the type of match your in next week!

Great Closer

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The stories i heard about your flow is true, you'll never be over great
So when i beat u to a pulp like my orange juice, it'll still have the bolder taste

barely descent cuz beat to a pulp is played

Don't act like you got an ovation for anything, cuz u aint got shit to appluad
With lines so pussy, you're verse look like they might develop whiskers & paws

LOL, this was dope

I used to fucks with you bob, but now you're just the common hater
I'll drop a comment later, about how we only refer to ur name as a commentator

Descent

I bring the drama, you can tell I don't show mercy to my enemies holmes
Axe have u laying on the ground with broken legs: just to say ur injury prone

barely descent

I'm bbbb-bad to the bone, don't act like you all of a sudden a baller cunt
Cuz my lines could stand out more than urs, even if i used a smaller font

barely descent

Ya taste is horrific, I mean if you thought Bob was anywhere near relavent
Obviously been the carbon copy of Chrit, took him way out of his element

This was cool

I out way u in any measurement, the old wordplay? wtf would u do without it?
Nothing, becuz u have so little flow...they can't even measure u in fluid ounces

barely descent

See it's nice to see someone try and match up, but still aint vicious as me
But its too many fish in the sea..
So when u plan harbor victory, I'll be there to sink ya intentions with ease

barely descent closer



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Bob

I've swung these axes, disfiguring this kid with inert verbs
I skin cat's alive, so I don't give a fuck what you purr fur
my intellect grips, holding heads that hide facts, go and try axe
but flaunt your quote percent and get smacked with a pie graph
I'm psychic, and guess what? I can foresee where your text leads...
writing wack, and your name is the type of match your in next week!

rofl, your closer was awsome. i thought that was a dope dope idea and funny ass punch

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Multi


I'm bbbb-bad to the bone, don't act like you all of a sudden a baller cunt
Cuz my lines could stand out more than urs, even if i used a smaller font
I out way u in any measurement, the old wordplay? wtf would u do without it?
Nothing, becuz u have so little flow...they can't even measure u in fluid ounces


multi, you def can write a verus that flows. you do a really good job at saying the right words and syllables to make your punches flow smoothly. which makes your verus really good. but your punches just lacked man.


i thought you both had some really played shit, i mean you both threw pussy lines, lol.

overal i thought Multi's verus was smoother, but Bob's was the one with better punches.

so

vote: Bob



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bleed from your mouth, layered red and thin, gasp and spit
punching the film from this bastards lips...
.......................like I'm watching an axeshun flick!

lol nice opener

blast your head, cause this trill OG's skull i'm bashing
pretending your ill, like you don't force a southern accent

pretty dope

I've swung these axes, disfiguring this kid with inert verb
I skin cat's alive, so I don't give a fuck what you purr fur

nice

i'm high and damn yo.. you ain't close to niching dope flows
I just know you no showed more times than I've hit the homegrown!

alright

your spitting so so, punches with the effects of laughing badly
bitch I'll stab your daddy, feed him to Japs and call it calamari

alright

I'd have to slap these heads if they said your spitting excellent
piles of your punches are broken, considered in da wrecked shit


ok

my intellect grips, holding heads that hide facts, go and try axe
but flaunt your quote percent and get smacked with a pie graph

lol nice punch


I'm psychic, and guess what? I can foresee where your text leads...
writing wack, and your name is the type of match your in next week!

dope closer
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The stories i heard about your flow is true, you'll never be over great
So when i beat u to a pulp like my orange juice, it'll still have the bolder taste

alright coulda bin a better opener

Don't act like you got an ovation for anything, cuz u aint got shit to appluad
With lines so pussy, you're verse look like they might develop whiskers & paws

nice

I used to fucks with you bob, but now you're just the common hater
I'll drop a comment later, about how we only refer to ur name as a commentator

ok

I bring the drama, you can tell I don't show mercy to my enemies holmes
Axe have u laying on the ground with broken legs: just to say ur injury prone

alright

I'm bbbb-bad to the bone, don't act like you all of a sudden a baller cunt
Cuz my lines could stand out more than urs, even if i used a smaller font

not feelin

Ya taste is horrific, I mean if you thought Bob was anywhere near relavent
Obviously been the carbon copy of Chrit, took him way out of his element

ok

I out way u in any measurement, the old wordplay? wtf would u do without it?
Nothing, becuz u have so little flow...they can't even measure u in fluid ounces

alright

See it's nice to see someone try and match up, but still aint vicious as me
But its too many fish in the sea..
So when u plan harbor victory, I'll be there to sink ya intentions with ease

alright closer

overall bob took this imo with harder punches and consistency i could really only give flow to multi this was a pretty good battle but

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