RapVerse.com Community - Barz Of Steel, Leady, And Indeph Present...."ACUNAMATATA!"

08-19-05, 12:23 PM

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Payn

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i like diz piece Barz u stood out on it, i feel indeph would come in 2nd den leady was ight but overall tha vocab was a lil slabby needs touching up...but tha structure, topic was good, & evathang in between but jus work on it...keep writing 7.5/10

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