Left Left Left Right Left.............
thats right there wont be nothin left when i finish this breath
right now im shootin hand guns.. but the ak is next..
gettin trained to aim str8 for the brain then one to the chest
lay em to rest crawlin thru this fuckin swamp like ses
cuz in this army you cant harm me son im fighting for this
elevation for the nation of these gods that spit
but if you think of fuckin with me i ask you to cease and assist
or its the fatigues in green and boots that gleam and kill you right quik

now drained my brain is strained from these war l simulations
down and out theres no doubt that im down for the situation
strugglin huddlin with peeps like me that see what we facin
who rep the streets indeed we liven it.. but still be complacent
doin it pursuing shit and its easy to see
that this army life is trife just the life for me
some would agree
others wanna be
haten on we
who unite to lite the mic allright thats plain to see
but i keep it tight day or nite take flight you cant catch me
when i return you feel the burn of bullets right at thee
there be many in good and plenty that will try to capture me
but that wont happen i hurt the masses and cause cotastrophies
react with action You heard the captain get down on your knees
beg and plead but we do our job like the mob causin casulties
those refugees will be shattered from impressions thats lasting................

G , L, O ...........On the feedback dawg i tweeked it a lil holla back!!!!!

way 2 represent nice piece

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i liked the internal rhyming

flow was off a bit in places


up vocab and imagery

not bad yo

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shit was good.
did your thing.
keep it up.

uppin fo mo feedback....................................

uppin for feedback yall...............................

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thanks for the feedback keep it up....................ill return the favor

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Feedback Yall Feedback I Need Feedback Like A Horse Needs A Feedbag Ya Heard!

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now drained my brain is strained from these war l simulations
down and out theres no doubt that im down for the situation
strugglin huddlin with peeps like me that see what we facin
who rep the streets indeed we liven it.. but still be complacent

Dat SHit was SIck ON MY chartz damn Nigga u GETT up derre i hope 2 see u in 2 weeks u gon b sick dogg b ez i likedat rhyme ^^

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thanks for the feedback yalll i really appreciate it

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That shit is tough.Keep your head up my nigga keep it gully