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checkin in....not sure what my topic will be yet....

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maybe, a spider's web

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using my other extension credit..............

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Extension granted but next time, please do it bit earlier hehe

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Holding A Package Left Him Molded And Savage
Spoke With The Average And Told Then They'd Manage
Cartriges Of Stranger Burdans, Helpin The Worries of Others
Concealing The Tears...Has His Vision Blurried And Smothered
Worried, So Covers His Insicurity With The Pain Of Friends
An Everlasting Line Of Insacure Biengs That Will Never Mend
Several Bends But None Leading To A Immunisation Or Cure
Starring Through The Views Of The Others So His Own Ain't Pure
The Barren Wasteland In Which He Dwells Holds No Meaning
And The Treament He Needs Won't Be Arriving This Evening
For He Stands In The Shadows Of All, Unable To Move Foward
And Is Winded By Wisardry To Find The True Imagery Of Horror
He Holds A Life Sentence Behind The Wall Of Pain Which He Can't Bear
Wakes Up Every Morning To Find His Soul Entrapped There.
With No Goal, No Dream, No Point Of Vision To Chase
He Strolls On A Stream On A Mission To Find His Place
Regreting Never Analyzing His Own Situation And Position
He's Left Blind...Unable To See The World...With His Own Vision

No Show Verse.......If Sabre Does Show Then Fuck it....Just Vote

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well i do have till tonight to drop...but i thought you used an extension credit? that's why i haven't dropped yet, cause i was planning to do it tomorrow morning

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alright, i keyed something up...mainly because i'm getting drunk tonight and wont be able to drop later on.

this is a thinking piece, enjoy.

A Spider's Web

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Damn nce battle
both could have came harder - but still both dropped decent pieces

Tech ya started off good then in the middle it was ok but ya started sleeping at the end - i dont think ya put in as much effort as ya thought you would have to
and
sabre ya did a nce creative piece and stayed on point ya stayed through from beginnin to end

for better verse - and being more creative
my vote goes to SABRE
for explanation above

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Tech's verse was pretty abstract and it was difficult to get into it and see where he was going with it. I thought he did a good job with his flow structure and vocab, but the concept its self needed work...

Sabre's was unbelievable. Great structure, great choice of words, great comparison and a great way to close it off. The imagery and emotion was well felt and although this was a short piece, it delivered a message nicely. This piece really captivated me.

Good work both but I have to
v/ Sabre

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Was he robbed of the ashphalt that cushioned his face?

thanks for voting....uppin for more....nice battle sabre....

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