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Old 02-21-06, 03:11 PM   #1
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LIGHTWEIGHT: BlAzInHoT (1-0) vs. Oz. (3-2)

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This is the match for the LightWeight Title. Whoever wins will have to defend the title, whoever loses cannot compete for this title the next week.
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Old 02-22-06, 09:57 AM   #2
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checkity checkity
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Old 02-22-06, 12:58 PM   #3
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Going Under

Cant hold on anymore man,im going~under, lifes jus my growing~blunder
Theres quik sand flowing~under me, n for me man its not slowing~wonder

Ingulfs my mind, how'd i get ta this~damn~point, I look bak disappoint-
Ment is all i can remember. only 29, but still smoking this~damn~joint

I'm sitting on my couch in my shitty~apartment, not a pretty~compartment
Wholes punctured in the wall,three rooms, small like a glove compartment

Da stuffing comming out of da couch,40 ounce in hand as i go to crouch
Puke on the floor,sit back rub my unshaved face and think as i slouch

The wall paper is droopin down on the wall, this place falling~apart
Phone rings,callin~apartment manager demanding money im stallin~start

To say ill get it,but she hangs up, jus a lie i got nothin for~rent
Nothing anymore~spent it all gambling, those drugs, n some more~went

To women,walk over to the rooms~small~sink, countinue to consume~my~drink
N smoke dat joint,stair in da cracked mirror,ugly face in it,resume to think

That i was nothing since a small~kid, get dizzy n grap the wall~rid
Myself agian of vomate. when i was seven my school got the call~hid

The truth, they said my parents were gone, that they had dissapeared
N den put me in an orphanig, n no one wanted me n this~brought~tears

Started den n my life kept goin~down, the waters jus been growing~drown
At anypoint i think i jus mite cuz my life neva been easygoing~frowns

Now indented on my dirty face, return to the living room witout grace
Toppel onto the floor, screaming out loud gotta get out of this place

I stand up n stagger over to the window, savin thoughts within~blow
In den out, angrely pull it open, my head spins~snow starts to blow

Into my apartment, 8th floor, below, covering the ground the~snow
Den i slowly get up on the ledge, i see~no point in life n then go
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Old 02-22-06, 10:29 PM   #4
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Damn Sorry Yall My Comp Feel off on Me and its been in the shop so i couldnt check or drop early as usual but ill prolly drop tommorow

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Old 02-22-06, 10:38 PM   #5
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Why?

Why is a word of questioning
Thoughtfully a answer should be given
Slowly but not hastly to finish guessing
For the answer to the why question
Why, is a question were the answer is a reason
why should the leaves come and go becasue of season?
Like many I think the best season is spring
If for exception of poisin ivy and bee stings
Why, why must people past?
which makes crying tears that always last
the thought of past is in the present
why must a king discriminate against the peasants?

The worlds most intelligent questions start with why
Why must we live just to die?
Why must why be a question?
why,why,why is that even the question?






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Old 02-23-06, 09:42 AM   #6
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aight uppin votes
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Old 02-23-06, 05:17 PM   #7
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Oz. came with some like grade three shit.

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Old 02-23-06, 05:19 PM   #8
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why you say that because it wasnt long ?

Inadequate voting dog your name is like some third grade shit
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Old 02-23-06, 05:27 PM   #9
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Oz.
why you say that because it wasnt long ?

Inadequate voting dog your name is like some third grade shit


My name is a joke, and no it wasn't because it wasn't long. I usually don't write any of my pieces over 20 lines.

It was just shitty.

Quote:
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Why?

Why is a word of questioning Obviously.
Thoughtfully a answer should be given
Slowly but not hastly to finish guessing
For the answer to the why question Last three lines had horrible flow and were just stupid.
Why, is a question were the answer is a reason
why should the leaves come and go becasue of season? You're just forcing a rhyme for reason, cause the season thing is stupid.
Like many I think the best season is spring
If for exception of poisin ivy and bee stings Nobody gives a fuck your favourtie season is Spring.
Why, why must people past?
which makes crying tears that always last
the thought of past is in the present
why must a king discriminate against the peasants? Only have decent part in your piece. Shitty flow.

The worlds most intelligent questions start with why Most questions do.
Why must we live just to die? We don't live to die. We live to live, if we lived to die we'd just kill ourselfs when we were born.
Why must why be a question? Because without it we wouldn't have intellegent ones. You said it yourself.
why,why,why is that even the question? You just repeated yourself dumbass.



It sucked, straight up.
 
Old 02-23-06, 05:28 PM   #10
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Only half* decent. <- What I meant to say..

Anyways..

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Old 02-23-06, 06:00 PM   #11
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there, he provided explanation.
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Old 02-23-06, 08:23 PM   #12
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Umm :huh?:

I Didnt ask for an explanation I was jus being myself
and Umm I Dont Need any critiquing from a vagina
or someone who goes by the name of wingspan ?

WTF
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Old 02-23-06, 09:13 PM   #13
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wingspan aka the other mod of this league

yeah, blah blah, i own you and such.
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Old 02-23-06, 10:14 PM   #14
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No No WingSpit

You Own This League Not Me

You Need To Check Yaself

edit: to make it clear, my old name was drakel, and yes, i have owned you, can own you, and will always own you

no more freeposting.
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Old 02-25-06, 01:11 PM   #15
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1-0 me uppin more votes
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