Have to check in by wensday if you don't you will be DQed.
post verse by thursday or you will be DQ
if you pm and can't drop i will grant you a day longer but thats it.

plz check in and drop your verse.

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check,10lines asswipe!

yes ma'am...check

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The Legacy lets u rep it, well thats a disgrace
Cuz ya dont continue skill, losing's ya fate
Rymes be imperfect, you lack str8 intellect
Matta fact ya rhymes bug me, u a insect
Callen me an asswipe, U write ur own ass
I mean u wipe ur own ass, yo thats the facts
True loyalty? is that how the fuck you role?
Left The Movement in a day, well that aint Loy-AL
Sonnin this cat quick, dawg you lack dick
Stop actin like u sumthin, wen u really whack shit


quick key

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Listen...
C'mon facing me,ya catchin more boos than alcholics
You're more of a faggot,than Roger Trapped In The Closet
Might call you a Mystery,cuz after this you lying in shadows
Rest is History,Leave you running home with ya Eyes Closed
C'mon I'll hit ya lip,write something down then flip the skript
Easy win,C-him-L-IT(clit),Always knew Mystic was SO-A-CHick

Please...
For you its a win/lose situations,if ya lose LL give ya a beating
And If ya win.............Than strobe banning you for cheating
The kid str8 weak,Go ahead and just pre-write with a couple pens
But still after that MC still struggles to come up with a Max of 10

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bar#1...boos and alcholics(simpe),Roger was the character in the
sequals of Rkellys Trapped in the Closet(watch the VMAs if possible)
bar#2...easy to understand
bar#3...Flip the Skript goes with the 2nd line when i flipped his name
(SO-A-CH,CH-A-OS)
bar#4...easy to understand
bar#5...i was kinda tryin to use the concept of a Bench Press(think about it)

The Legacy lets u rep it, well thats a disgrace
Cuz ya dont continue skill, losing's ya fate
1...this was basic.Didn't connect or hit as a punch at all.
Rymes be imperfect, you lack str8 intellect
Matta fact ya rhymes bug me, u a insect
2.....wtf?...bug/insect?Terrible concept..
Callen me an asswipe, U write ur own ass
I mean u wipe ur own ass, yo thats the facts
0...poor rhyming and weak ass punch.
True loyalty? is that how the fuck you role?
Left The Movement in a day, well that aint Loy-AL
2.....weak..this was a better concept than the others and could have worked...but u fuked it up with horrible wording
Sonnin this cat quick, dawg you lack dick
Stop actin like u sumthin, wen u really whack shit
2...this ssssssooooooooooo much of a forced multi...

C'mon facing me,ya catchin more boos than alcholics
You're more of a faggot,than Roger Trapped In The Closet
4..relating boos to booze is played out.And the punch itself was meh.
Might call you a Mystery,cuz after this you lying in shadows
Rest is History,Leave you running home with ya Eyes Closed
4..meh...ok...
C'mon I'll hit ya lip,write something down then flip the skript
Easy win,C-him-L-IT(clit),Always knew Mystic was SO-A-CHick
4..well..an original concept..i'll give ya that at least.
Please...
For you its a win/lose situations,if ya lose LL give ya a beating
And If ya win.............Than strobe banning you for cheating
3...seemed to SG too much
The kid str8 weak,Go ahead and just pre-write with a couple pens
But still after that MC still struggles to come up with a Max of 10
4...basic..

OK..I don't need to explain much.
One-sided battle..Mystic ain't have shit.

Makes me wonder how mystic spit that shit in my battle with him.
Pre-written?..NAh...
BITTEN?...Yup...I think so!! -_-
you can count on me searching the net this weekend mystic.

Anyways
Vote-Cezar

Nothing

vs

For you its a win/lose situations,if ya lose LL give ya a beating
And If ya win.............Than strobe banning you for cheating

This was a pretty easy win for Cezar, Mystic had nothing I liked really and it seemed very freestylist, no real punches. Cezar's verse wasn't anything special but I quite liked that quoted punch and he tried to be creative.

v/ Cezar

damn...one-sided battle indeed...damn...

Mystic:

nothing in there that was hard hittin, damn...

Cezar:

C'mon I'll hit ya lip,write something down then flip the skript
Easy win,C-him-L-IT(clit),Always knew Mystic was SO-A-CHick

The kid str8 weak,Go ahead and just pre-write with a couple pens
But still after that MC still struggles to come up with a Max of 10

V/Cezar

those two bars killed it...just outdid it....

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The Legacy lets u rep it, well thats a disgrace
Cuz ya dont continue skill, losing's ya fate
ight basic punch...not hard hitting but ok
Rymes be imperfect, you lack str8 intellect
Matta fact ya rhymes bug me, u a insect
lol wasn't feeling
Callen me an asswipe, U write ur own ass
I mean u wipe ur own ass, yo thats the facts
....naw...
True loyalty? is that how the fuck you role?
Left The Movement in a day, well that aint Loy-AL
ight...little personal but didn't hit that ahrd..
Sonnin this cat quick, dawg you lack dick
Stop actin like u sumthin, wen u really whack shit
multi's seemed forced but keep at it,

C'mon facing me,ya catchin more boos than alcholics
You're more of a faggot,than Roger Trapped In The Closet
i liked it you tried with mroe creativty..nice
Might call you a Mystery,cuz after this you lying in shadows
Rest is History,Leave you running home with ya Eyes Closed
this was ighht
C'mon I'll hit ya lip,write something down then flip the skript
Easy win,C-him-L-IT(clit),Always knew Mystic was SO-A-CHick
nice i liked thsi good line
For you its a win/lose situations,if ya lose LL give ya a beating
And If ya win.............Than strobe banning you for cheating
eh you ahd to strech it but ight,.not that good of a punch
The kid str8 weak,Go ahead and just pre-write with a couple pens
But still after that MC still struggles to come up with a Max of 10
ight this was alright...

well im gonna have to give to cezar more creativty and punches


there is always next week keep at it

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4-0....c'mon lets keep em coming

5-0 is a k.o lol

1 mroe vote..then

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topical head in text leage

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210474

Drop a vote on this please.

C'mon facing me,ya catchin more boos than alcholics
^^
one good line in the battle and it's just old concept flipped a lil bit

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