Shaolin's one of the founding members of the group that I'm in, Ill Intentionz (since 2002). This is a diss track to the "other white rapper" in town (he's 25% black), D. Thriller. He's been beefing with me since 8th grade (2000) and beefing with my crew since we formed. He's just a big joke to us, but recently he said some shit about me on my group's soundclick. Now I hadn't said anything in like 2 years, but I thought I could do another one for old times sake. The intro and outro will help you understand it a little better. And speaking of which, yes, that is actually him, and the voicemails are 100% real.

1st Verse - Shaolin
2nd Verse - 9th Degree
Chorus - Both (for obvious reasons lol)
Beat - "Wack Ni99az" by Consequence

Shaolin feat. 9th Degree - Wack Ni99az

I know in some parts my vocals might be mixed a little low, but it's not really that bad, right? Lol, enjoy.

links:

Apexx and Triple N
Ebrics, Vato XL, El Rey

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ok im'a leave bad feed,seen as im first to post, that way i can start the trend of you getting nothing but bad feed.


4real though.......
intro's cool, makes me want to see if anyone called me.
First verse has solid quality, flows cool, beats simple, this track has a old school feel to it, based on the beat. felt the first verse, had some on point flow and lyrics.

hooks weak, didnt feel it at all bro. needs some compression and more emotion
umm, wtf, my player stopped , oh wait, my internet conncetion wouldnt allow me to play wackness

second verse flow is ok, emotion is lacking, good lyrics and punches, just emotion lacking bro.
again fuck that hook, not feeling it at all man

overall its a decent track, just a few touch ups and it will be hott with two T's. -_-

alright
im jsut leaving feed on your verse
flow fell off in one part besides that it was on lyrically it was ok needs upped on the volume some more emotion adlibs dont sound quite right
jsut some minor shit that needs fixing
props on dropping didnt5 knwo you did audio
sorry abotu not opening this i left earlier

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Thanks for the feed so far, upping for more. I'll gladly return any favors.

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I like this first guy.. he aint very hype but he got dope lines... but he brags bout his scion hahaha......chorus is aint bad.... it could be better...your verse can flow... but you aint got that much emotion... some parts got good pressence just on and off throughout i like this though.. didnt know you knew how to actually rap...good shit... just fix da hook verses is straight good shit

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yea i agree wit J Summers wit the first dude..not very energetic but his lines are aight..LMAO @ the chorus..-_-..your verse was good the flow was a lil shakey tho..umm you got a pop filter? if not invest in one cause somewhere i heard some p's clip the mic..umm you right the verse was like up and down wit the sound..ill give u some tips on how to fix that..and no..not hard limitin lol..umm other then that i liked the track man..intro and outro were cool..

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lol @ intro..

first dude.. his quality ill. emotion ain't there tho. Could be much more. Delivery pretty coo. like his lyrics. got a nice flow too. rtickin' like a time bomb..

hook......... i like it..... LOL he sound liek 50 on hook.

9th, you ain't even worth the pencil I'm writing with. lmao i liked that. flow coo, go off on some points, but throughout it's good. lyrics are ill tho. Delivery coo. vocals a lil loud. But i like this verse better than first.

hook again..

lol @ dude sounding like 50 tho. in hook and outro..

but can't really understand outro shit.

but overall this wasn't that bad man. beat was ill tho. good shit. lyrics were nice. good diss. nice track overall man. hook could use some effects to vocals to make it stand out more.

but not bad. 8.3/10

RTF:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...5389post2825389

*One Shot*

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beat is cool..i like it


verse 1: yup cool punches..nice flow..delivery is good..emotion was just iight



hook...its okay..simple and




verse 2 : yeah u had nice flow..punches were decent..quality was a lil blah...but meh as long as upass ur message over thats what matters more...



umm..i didnt even care to listen to the voicemails..a dude got issues with u and still keeps calling?..wow..he needs to either squash the beef like stated on the track or get a life...a hobby!

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He's asking to squash the beef, but already went wayyyyyyy past the line when he made a diss track about Shaolin's 1 year-old daughter. So he's shook now, and wants to make sure none of us are gonna whup his ass again.

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All the good things have been said, so like, I wont waste time... But generally good everything.

Issues are I think just 9ths vocals in verse and hook... As in the quality/amplitude of them, not the lyrics/flow/voice etc.

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Upping again...

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rtf mu fucka

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LOL @ the voice mails. Word, I already told you what I thought of this on msn. But i'll add some more. I think you're voice sounds differant from the last time I hear one of your tracks. Honestly, I find you have less emossion and presence. Your voice was harder, deeper, grimier, it sounded like you were angry, I liked that, it suited you. "You aint worth the pencil i'm using to write this" "You only talk shit on your myspace bulletin" Lmfao. Nice man, you're never without quotables

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