checkin' in... 20?

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235542
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235548.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235541
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=3089570

i got another champ match on Rm lets make it 16 lines.............

if cool with you i need an extension til tomorrow morning
some personal shit came up

Yea, that's cool... we'll say the new due date is 2:00 PM EST on Friday

aigght lets go

You climbed to the top, but I dont give a damn what you've achieved
Get sent back down da mountain like U got 10 commandments for da league
got me peeved, detective work in text battles is lame to do
the way you butcher other peoples quotes
.................David Lama would be ashamed of you
Mr. line quoting fag fake mod, its time I check you
Im FROM this site trus...you only here because YOURS dont respect you
I remember you was pet, too...so be easy and take a breather
and Com down bitch you probably cant beat his ass neither
In every league you wack and slow, the facts'll show
1-2 was YOUR idea...yet you was one of the first cats to go

tavarez102882: just came back from a baby shower in NYC.......mad ass up there son im still tryna get over it
DaTrusHurtz: haha, that's awesome, but wait who ya callin' son?
tavarez102882: lol thats NY lingo, im still in Bronx Mode
DaTrusHurtz: word, i hear ya, i just always confront people when they call me son and i'm like uh... am i older than you?

Bitches get sensitive........... you know how that goes
So I'll take it back, Trus you aint my son
..............I could never father such a wack flow
Maybe i should apologize to DaTrus... if disrespect is what I did
But I'd be telling Foleys big enough to match the one molesting kids
This kid is fake cant equate, see him viciously ate
Could pimp a state...how U fuck with Dakota bitches and snakes
So its no need to wonder if your lacking a hoe...
U dont drop ya Datelines, U da pedophile they catch on the show
CALL ME A FLUKE, i battled Mim, Butler, Shakes...never went fronting
U champ a shell of the LBL, I held the belt when it fucking meant something
They all left, Merc signed out, Brock was tired of typing rhymes
U proved even BUMS can win in this league....signed in at the right time
Should try winning on OTHER sites...make a few friends w/ some chumps
Cuz you aint the One, Da.....And Halloween aint til the end of the month
so beat it

anyyyy day now trus .

Now Nelson...
I've herd ur a spic, an iraqi, i know this is upsetting ya dude
U've been mistaken for so many races, I won a parlay betting on you
U won't defeat me, n' my college classes have pleased me
Cuz I got the TA I've always wanted...
... the kind thats really easy
I been facin' the best weekly, n' at best ur a bitch
I've seen the area of dope... n' ur perimeter is less than a inch
BITCH YOU DON'T HURT, N' UR A JUST SAD FAG WITH A VERSE
Oh sorry, that came out the wrong way... kinda like ur birth
Ur mad borin', you could fix that, and man it would seem
U have so little Witten u, ya tried signin' him to ya fantasy team
Ur ugly, but I'm ownin' shit, so word to ya momma
I have Braggin Writes...
... you just have a fat bitch that looks like a Lama
Ur a fake champ, but a real cheater, we all laugh at this queer
"Beating" Shake fueled such a controversy, it gave u gas for a year!

DaTrusHurtz: what do you think about quality of heads in the 1-2? Should there be a higher bar about who is let in or just let average heads in and let them elevate in the league
tavarez102882: i think in the beggining you should let them in and eliminate the weaker ones as the season progresses
tavarez102882: give them the chance to improve and if they dont, get em out

That was the interview we've seen, ur ideas were helpful to me
But why the FUCK would u propose an idea to kick u out of the league?
Ya got no friends, no job, ur an ugly sight in this rap
U woodwork... n' ya verse looks like it came right outta that
Hate vote this, d/r that, but ya know what the worst is
These days I don't know why people even vote...
... for ANY of ur verses
The league is weaker, but fag ur not commanding when roaming
You represent the state of text... while standin' up in Wyoming
I can diss you, ur a bitch dude, but I'm agreein' on truth, see
You were still the champ...
... by bein' dickrode and beatin' a newbie

Sorry for takin' awhile, I had other shit to do this morning. Uppin' for votes.. and I don't want Serb voting.

Mr. line quoting fag fake mod, its time I check you
Im FROM this site trus...you only here because YOURS dont respect you
I remember you was pet, too...so be easy and take a breather
and Com down bitch you probably cant beat his ass neither
CALL ME A FLUKE, i battled Mim, Butler, Shakes...never went fronting
U champ a shell of the LBL, I held the belt when it fucking meant something
They all left, Merc signed out, Brock was tired of typing rhymes
U proved even BUMS can win in this league....signed in at the right time


vs

I've herd ur a spic, an iraqi, i know this is upsetting ya dude
U've been mistaken for so many races, I won a parlay betting on you
Ur mad borin', you could fix that, and man it would seem
U have so little Witten u, ya tried signin' him to ya fantasy team


v/Tav

I really wasnt feeling much that Trus dropped

n.tav


Mr. line quoting fag fake mod, its time I check you
Im FROM this site trus...you only here because YOURS dont respect you

In every league you wack and slow, the facts'll show
1-2 was YOUR idea...yet you was one of the first cats to go


Bitches get sensitive........... you know how that goes
So I'll take it back, Trus you aint my son
..............I could never father such a wack flow

CALL ME A FLUKE, i battled Mim, Butler, Shakes...never went fronting
U champ a shell of the LBL, I held the belt when it fucking meant something


vs

da trus

Now Nelson...
I've herd ur a spic, an iraqi, i know this is upsetting ya dude
U've been mistaken for so many races, I won a parlay betting on you

BITCH YOU DON'T HURT, N' UR A JUST SAD FAG WITH A VERSE
Oh sorry, that came out the wrong way... kinda like ur birth
Ur mad borin', you could fix that, and man it would seem
U have so little Witten u, ya tried signin' him to ya fantasy team

Ur a fake champ, but a real cheater, we all laugh at this queer
"Beating" Shake fueled such a controversy, it gave u gas for a year!

Ya got no friends, no job, ur an ugly sight in this rap
U woodwork... n' ya verse looks like it came right outta that

The league is weaker, but fag ur not commanding when roaming
You represent the state of text... while standin' up in Wyoming


pretty close battle...i liked n tavarez in the beginning then after the convo n those lines i wasn't really feeling at all...da trus hurtz came pretty nice had a couple lines that missed...but alot of connections more then tavarez...cool battle

vote-datrushurtz

Mr. line quoting fag fake mod, its time I check you
Im FROM this site trus...you only here because YOURS dont respect you
I remember you was pet, too...so be easy and take a breather
and Com down bitch you probably cant beat his ass neither
i used a com wordplay last week lol. but u used it differently so i quoted
Maybe i should apologize to DaTrus... if disrespect is what I did
But I'd be telling Foleys big enough to match the one molesting kids
CALL ME A FLUKE, i battled Mim, Butler, Shakes...never went fronting
U champ a shell of the LBL, I held the belt when it fucking meant something

vs.


I've herd ur a spic, an iraqi, i know this is upsetting ya dude
U've been mistaken for so many races, I won a parlay betting on you
U won't defeat me, n' my college classes have pleased me
Cuz I got the TA I've always wanted...
... the kind thats really easy
Ur mad borin', you could fix that, and man it would seem
U have so little Witten u, ya tried signin' him to ya fantasy team
That was the interview we've seen, ur ideas were helpful to me
But why the FUCK would u propose an idea to kick u out of the league?
I can diss you, ur a bitch dude, but I'm agreein' on truth, see
You were still the champ...
... by bein' dickrode and beatin' a newbie

v/ DTH - edges this. n.taverez came more personal, but i feel a lot of his personals were bland where as DTH added more wit. cool battle though dudes.. keep at it.

2-1 trus .

got me peeved, detective work in text battles is lame to do
the way you butcher other peoples quotes
.................David Lama would be ashamed of you
Mr. line quoting fag fake mod, its time I check you
Im FROM this site trus...you only here because YOURS dont respect you
I remember you was pet, too...so be easy and take a breather
and Com down bitch you probably cant beat his ass neither
Bitches get sensitive........... you know how that goes
So I'll take it back, Trus you aint my son
..............I could never father such a wack flow
They all left, Merc signed out, Brock was tired of typing rhymes
U proved even BUMS can win in this league....signed in at the right time
^tav i really liked this concept, but i didn't like the way u worded.

vs.

I've herd ur a spic, an iraqi, i know this is upsetting ya dude
U've been mistaken for so many races, I won a parlay betting on you
Ur mad borin', you could fix that, and man it would seem
U have so little Witten u, ya tried signin' him to ya fantasy team
That was the interview we've seen, ur ideas were helpful to me
But why the FUCK would u propose an idea to kick u out of the league?
Ya got no friends, no job, ur an ugly sight in this rap
U woodwork... n' ya verse looks like it came right outta that
^i'm not quoting this cause i liked it, i just wanted to say that it had potential, but the punch was bland. plus i've seen shit similar to this. should'a worded it better for more effectiveness

EDIT: btw, that parlay line was pretty dope DTH. u should'a had more creative shit like that.

pretty straiight battle, no hate to either, but nuttin too impressive this week. tav's verse seemed as if it was rushed and some of the wordin on some of his punches were off. i mean, he had some pretty cool shit, but nuttin that had me thinkin "DAMN!" also, that oneduh line was meh. like, i dunno.. that shit didn't appeal to me at all. i honestly don't know what the point of it was tav. as for DTH, u had a good run as champ, but i honestly think this was a weaker verse on ur part. alot of ur shit was just statement'ish/ worded off/ seemed rushed as well. this could honestly go either way, but i feel that tav had the stronger quotables in his verse. so i gotta give it to him.

v/ N. Tavarez

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N.Tavarez

You climbed to the top, but I dont give a damn what you've achieved
Get sent back down da mountain like U got 10 commandments for da league

Good opener, fresh.

got me peeved, detective work in text battles is lame to do
the way you butcher other peoples quotes
.................David Lama would be ashamed of you

Don't understand it.

Mr. line quoting fag fake mod, its time I check you
Im FROM this site trus...you only here because YOURS dont respect you

lol, cool.

I remember you was pet, too...so be easy and take a breather
and Com down bitch you probably cant beat his ass neither

Cool.

In every league you wack and slow, the facts'll show
1-2 was YOUR idea...yet you was one of the first cats to go

Decent personal.

Bitches get sensitive........... you know how that goes
So I'll take it back, Trus you aint my son
..............I could never father such a wack flow

Cool personal.

Maybe i should apologize to DaTrus... if disrespect is what I did
But I'd be telling Foleys big enough to match the one molesting kids

Good, I think...

This kid is fake cant equate, see him viciously ate
Could pimp a state...how U fuck with Dakota bitches and snakes

Cool.

So its no need to wonder if your lacking a hoe...
U dont drop ya Datelines, U da pedophile they catch on the show

lol, nice.

CALL ME A FLUKE, i battled Mim, Butler, Shakes...never went fronting
U champ a shell of the LBL, I held the belt when it fucking meant something

ok.

They all left, Merc signed out, Brock was tired of typing rhymes
U proved even BUMS can win in this league....signed in at the right time

ok...

Should try winning on OTHER sites...make a few friends w/ some chumps
Cuz you aint the One, Da.....And Halloween aint til the end of the month

I just used a Oneduh line in my no show verse, lol.

Overall: Pretty consistent verse with lots of personal attacks. Towards the end you started losing steam though, which could have hurt you. We'll soon find out.


DaTrusHurtz

Now Nelson...
I've herd ur a spic, an iraqi, i know this is upsetting ya dude
U've been mistaken for so many races, I won a parlay betting on you

Good personal punch.

U won't defeat me, n' my college classes have pleased me
Cuz I got the TA I've always wanted...
... the kind thats really easy

Good nameplay.

I been facin' the best weekly, n' at best ur a bitch
I've seen the area of dope... n' ur perimeter is less than a inch

Nice.

BITCH YOU DON'T HURT, N' UR A JUST SAD FAG WITH A VERSE
Oh sorry, that came out the wrong way... kinda like ur birth

Cool. Seems like it could have been worded better.

Ur mad borin', you could fix that, and man it would seem
U have so little Witten u, ya tried signin' him to ya fantasy team

Good wordplay.

Ur ugly, but I'm ownin' shit, so word to ya momma
I have Braggin Writes...
... you just have a fat bitch that looks like a Lama

lol, cool.

Ur a fake champ, but a real cheater, we all laugh at this queer
"Beating" Shake fueled such a controversy, it gave u gas for a year!

Good personal punch.

That was the interview we've seen, ur ideas were helpful to me
But why the FUCK would u propose an idea to kick u out of the league?

Cool personal.

Ya got no friends, no job, ur an ugly sight in this rap
U woodwork... n' ya verse looks like it came right outta that

Good wordplay.

Hate vote this, d/r that, but ya know what the worst is
These days I don't know why people even vote...
... for ANY of ur verses

ok.

The league is weaker, but fag ur not commanding when roaming
You represent the state of text... while standin' up in Wyoming

Cool.

I can diss you, ur a bitch dude, but I'm agreein' on truth, see
You were still the champ...
... by bein' dickrode and beatin' a newbie

Decent closer.

Overall: A tiny bit more consistent and didn't fall off in the end as much. Personals punch combinations were better and had more stand out wordplays.


Vote: DaTrusHurtz - Close battle. Felt he edged consistency slightly and delivered a few more punches along with his personals. Snatched wordplay up as well. Good battle.