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07-26-04, 09:58 PM | #1 | |||||
I'm So Punny
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Justin Time vs. Complexe Illness vs. Mr W Rite
IP: 95FF 1D86
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battles go up monday check in by wensday verses due by thursday votes due by the next sunday rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd bar limits: 4 line min. 20line max. REMEMBER in your check in thread you must edit it with 5 vote links, if not you will be subtracted a vote every time you are missing a link!!!!
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07-26-04, 10:39 PM | #2 | ||||
MyNd's Full
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IP: 4289 77F4
in 12 apiece i suppose
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07-27-04, 10:20 PM | #3 | |||||
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IP: B612 1038
Checkin in holla backk
here they are http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137773 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137803 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137745 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137798 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137811
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Im not bad shit....n y ya missin me bastids Leave nigga's in da past like history-classes |
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07-27-04, 11:18 PM | #4 | ||||
Light Weight
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IP: 7E8B E3EC
yo ill face u
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07-28-04, 07:40 PM | #5 | |||||
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IP: BDA3 2D11
iight loook this 1 is for
" Mr W.Rite " Yo im a Big dogg sikk and left for u is only Clues Mr W.rite u are right about something dogg youre gonna lose Now thats some Great news im slaughtering this fag Nigga be for real i hold more wins than a Grocery Bag You leared multiplecation in school u kno 2+2 at least So dumb battle 2 people jpoll said 20 lines max he said 12 a Peice Dont u GEt it im gonna kill ya fake ass dispose of ur whackness Punches Personals and flow whoa look back-miss,look at all u realli lack-this Might have some werid shit but dogg and u better Grin-u-bitch The best punch you got on me is if i Move-In-To-IT " Justin Time " Man if we had a Rivelrey man never b trues Justin time i kno ur Just in time to Lose I Kill niggaz like u With Ease ill beat ur ass If we had a Punch(line) Compition 5 minutes u whouldint last Now lemmie get this sraight u accualy think ur good Think u smart u damn retard got the brain compacity of Wood Now that aint good not 1 part sounds decint You see me dogg and ur gym coach explained well see Sprint ( Sprint cause hes scared )
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07-29-04, 07:37 PM | #6 | ||||
MyNd's Full
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IP: 34E1 AF90
10 lines thats all
hell the other kid didnt even check in Complexe step your game up man keyin his death in 10 lines.. Im still killin these newb bitches, still got fans in waves of bunches He’s still a loser, still wack and for christ sake still explainin punches And yea I peeped ya sig…spellings awful, u some kinda fool, shit If I were you I’d quit my day job…and go back to school bitch Complex Illnesse, yea right…hate being the one to call you out His moms had cow, and then went straight to the slaughter house No notables or accolades...resume is bare and least commended I throw mirage of punches...while his was never there to begin with but I’ll just end it...too busy laughing at the lines you wrote yourself guess I’ll cut this bitch some slack... before he chokes to death
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07-29-04, 07:49 PM | #7 | |||||
..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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IP: 9DA6 C725
Yo im a Big dogg sikk and left for u is only Clues
Mr W.rite u are right about something dogg youre gonna lose Now thats some Great news im slaughtering this fag Nigga be for real i hold more wins than a Grocery Bag You leared multiplecation in school u kno 2+2 at least So dumb battle 2 people jpoll said 20 lines max he said 12 a Peice Dont u GEt it im gonna kill ya fake ass dispose of ur whackness Punches Personals and flow whoa look back-miss,look at all u realli lack-this Might have some werid shit but dogg and u better Grin-u-bitch The best punch you got on me is if i Move-In-To-IT No Real Punches Or Personals Flow Was Okay 8/10 Im still killin these newb bitches, still got fans in waves of bunches He’s still a loser, still wack and for christ sake still explainin punches And yea I peeped ya sig…spellings awful, u some kinda fool, shit If I were you I’d quit my day job…and go back to school bitch Complex Illnesse, yea right…hate being the one to call you out His moms had cow, and then went straight to the slaughter house No notables or accolades...resume is bare and least commended I throw mirage of punches...while his was never there to begin with but I’ll just end it...too busy laughing at the lines you wrote yourself guess I’ll cut this bitch some slack... before he chokes to death Nice As Drop feelin It 9/10 Nice Vocab.. Winner..Mr
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07-29-04, 08:23 PM | #8 | ||||
Banned: Spamming
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IP: CCAE A7E8
complex verse was blah...nothing good whatsoever. Ive peeped Mr's stuff on original & normally comes awesome,. here u werent but u did enuff.
And yea I peeped ya sig…spellings awful, u some kinda fool, shit If I were you I’d quit my day job…and go back to school bitch but I’ll just end it...too busy laughing at the lines you wrote yourself guess I’ll cut this bitch some slack... before he chokes to death ^just made me laugh Vote. Mr W Rite |
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07-29-04, 11:15 PM | #9 | |||||
The Epitome Of Greatness
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IP: C1DA C961
Complex: I Wasnt Really Feeling Your Verse...It Was Kinda Basic...HaHa...Name Is Complex Rhymes Is Basic Blah! You Get It...Anyways...I Think You Could Have Done Better...You Had Some Decent Punches But None Really Hit That Hard...You Came Pretty Weak...The Structure Was Really Good Though...You Could Have Used Personals Maybe It Would Have Been Better....No W/P No Multies...Pretty Much A Basic Verse
Overall : 5/10 Mr W Rite: You Had Some Pretty Good Personals...The One About His Sig...And The Ones ABout His Name Were Good...Your Punches Were Decent Also...Better Than Complex's Punches But Not Hott Just Better Than His....Good Vocab...Good Structure...Decent Verse Overall : 7/10 Vote: Mr W Rite ~!1!~
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07-29-04, 11:25 PM | #10 | |||||
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IP: 64AC BF11
Illnesse? a i spell very bad dogg unless the was on purpose to do that
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07-30-04, 06:57 PM | #11 | |||
Flyweight
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IP: B6B2 3C4D
Complex Illnesse, yea right…hate being the one to call you out
His moms had cow, and then went straight to the slaughter house No notables or accolades...resume is bare and least commended I throw mirage of punches...while his was never there to begin with -enough to take this in my eyes CI just sucked really bad v) W.Rite |
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07-30-04, 07:05 PM | #12 | |||||
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IP: 0560 12E9
Complex
Yo im a Big dogg sikk and left for u is only Clues Mr W.rite u are right about something dogg youre gonna lose 7/10..ok, good play off his name Now thats some Great news im slaughtering this fag Nigga be for real i hold more wins than a Grocery Bag 3/10...doesnt make sense You leared multiplecation in school u kno 2+2 at least So dumb battle 2 people jpoll said 20 lines max he said 12 a Peice wtf are u talkin about? 3/10... Dont u GEt it im gonna kill ya fake ass dispose of ur whackness Punches Personals and flow whoa look back-miss,look at all u realli lack-this 6/10...blah! Might have some werid shit but dogg and u better Grin-u-bitch The best punch you got on me is if i Move-In-To-IT 6/10...gay. overall - 5/10...wack. Mr W.rite Im still killin these newb bitches, still got fans in waves of bunches He’s still a loser, still wack and for christ sake still explainin punches 7/10...lol, and the punches were wack as fuck And yea I peeped ya sig…spellings awful, u some kinda fool, shit If I were you I’d quit my day job…and go back to school bitch 6/10..no, weak Complex Illnesse, yea right…hate being the one to call you out His moms had cow, and then went straight to the slaughter house 6.5/10...ok No notables or accolades...resume is bare and least commended I throw mirage of punches...while his was never there to begin with 7/10...good punch but I’ll just end it...too busy laughing at the lines you wrote yourself guess I’ll cut this bitch some slack... before he chokes to death 6/10...weak closer overall - 6.5....u didnt need much v/Mr W.rite
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07-30-04, 07:43 PM | #13 | ||||||
"Click Clack"
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IP: 6247 B101
5-0 Ko Mr W.Rite Wins
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