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Old 04-15-07, 05:25 AM   #1
crazyboysoki
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Fuck yall!!!

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sup yall im hear to relaese this ryme like a high pitch fart,
im ahead in this rap game and yall got a shy bitch start,
im keepin the pace in the race and puttin you in your place,
burn you like mace and keep you runnin on a paper chase,
but i got bad news cause the papers in my two hands,
im holdin alot of weight like paris hiltons shoe stands,
i dont got money in my pockets but i got rims on my truck,
too bad i got two flat tires so im sittin here stuck,
its just my luck, need to find a way to become real rich,
ill start by robbin you point blank with my steal bitch,
take all your money, jewlery and most prized possesions,
gettin money the illegal way is my oversized obsession,
but yo, back to the reason that im here to do,
thats to blind you with my rymes like a hustler with a pool Q,
eight ball corner pocket and ive already won it,
just started this game and its already done, shit!
you should have recognized my skill when you ran up on me dog,
but now you layin dead on the ground like a cut down tree log,
and im the lumberjack quick with the attack,
givin you a smack leavin you lyin on your back,
addicted to crack, smokin it right out of the sack,
im a mack, circling round you like a race track,
how do i do it? i dont even know,
put a tiny whole in your throat and now you bleedin slow,
sharp ass razors with cocaine residue,
fall on you harder than the rain do,
cuttin you up into little tiny pieces,
ill beat your ass like i do to my little whiny nieces,
im skitsofranic and sykotic so dont cross in this direction,
people got things twisted so im here to make a correction,
they think i got problems with everyone in the world,
but there wrong cause i dont got a problem with my girl,
other than her, everyone can eat crap,
leave you lost, so you cant even find your way back with a street map,
now dont worry im done, im bout to end this wack shit,
but mess wit me and ill pop your ass like a back zit.
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Old 04-15-07, 08:11 PM   #2
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well it seems like u just put anything down when u rhyme....try being focused on just one subject or if u gonna freestyle be more creative with your punches....keep working on your flow.....~1~
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Old 04-16-07, 12:37 AM   #3
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Old 04-27-07, 12:38 AM   #4
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Yea..what was up with you just rhyming with anything..this was not a very good piece..seemed rushed../whack no offense you need to elevate.
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