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07-31-06, 07:56 PM | #1 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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"My Heat Can Sing"...new one from ya boyeeeeee...check me out!
IP: 2B7A 2084
http://www.soundclick.com/qakaprox
^^Click on "My heat can sing" Beat: Brayman productions Hook: Tha Q Verses 1 & 2: Q Concept: I just wanted to blow some steam off after work and this is what came out. It's a mixture of bragging, venting, and reflecting on my life. Holla 1 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232659 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232640 |
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07-31-06, 08:17 PM | #2 | |||||||
I see dumb people
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IP: 720D 94E5
What's hot:
fuckin' beat topp hook is ill like that la la la shit multi's in hook and verse tight. that one where you had stamina and shit in it, was sick string. flow delivery emotion all nice What's coo: quality coo. not best, not worst lyrics coo. nothing really stood out, but overall nice What's not: vocals tad bit too high in first verse shit overall dope. love the fuckin' hook man. the hook fuckin' ripped it. love that hook. beat dope too. stay up man. LOOK @ THESE NIGGAS!!!!!!! lol 9/10 RTF: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232650 |
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07-31-06, 08:17 PM | #3 | ||||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: FA42 CF1A
Not a bad track, but I don't think it's even close to your best by far. Your hooks have definitely been getting better, but the actual verses seemed a little lack luster to me. I noticed a couple of punch ins in the first verse that I'm not used to hearing from you. I don't know if you got lazy or what, but it just didn't seem like you. This would be cool for a mixtape, but I think it needs a little work on the first verse. Second verse was straight, but it seemed pretty repetetive, like with the flow and shit. Just didn't keep me intrested for too long. I think it might just be that I'm used to hearing more upbeat, faster tempo songs from you. I don't know.....
Good shit though
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07-31-06, 08:20 PM | #4 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: 2B7A 2084
^^hmm..there are no punch ins in this track
1 preciate da feed tho |
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07-31-06, 08:22 PM | #6 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: 2B7A 2084
^^yep
thanx for the nods yall 1 |
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07-31-06, 09:20 PM | #7 | |||||||
I see dumb people
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IP: 720D 94E5
RTF whenever possible ~_~
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07-31-06, 10:19 PM | #8 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: C7F6 C148
Beat is nasty son....like that shit....
Hook: My shit lmao...concept ridiculous....message to bitch's who talk shit an no action.... 1st: Flow on point....lyrics dope....like how u switched it up a lil bit on some parts pretty much repetitive..... Hook: Same 2nd: Got real creative on the lyrics....like you was stabbin' a steak an saucin' a-1 on it like ima fuck this shit up lmao just feelin it homie....like your presence on this one especially...real cocky too man....i can see some dudes fightin while this bumpin' over-all dog 8/10...good shit i know i will be hearin' more from u i always do keep it 100 kidd... |
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07-31-06, 10:22 PM | #9 | ||||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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When you changed flow right before you said something about your grandmama it sounded a lot like a punch in. Now that I relisten I'm not hearing a lot of what I heard the first time, but whatever.......it still sounds like a punch in
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07-31-06, 11:03 PM | #10 | ||||
I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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LMFAO yeahhhh boi. this hook is dangerous AI stand up. im feelin this to def. The chorus is sick. The quality is alot better then before. Your multi's SICK like alwayz.. Your emotion is good for this kind of track..the lyrics is HOT. i like this kind of shit. so thats a plus on my feedback. Shit this is a dangerous track. Im feelin this. added to rv station Uh Huh
8.5/10 nice shit
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08-01-06, 12:49 AM | #11 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: C7F6 C148
PREACH....K.ontroverz.Y lmao.....shit is deffinitly fiya mayne....
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08-01-06, 01:40 AM | #12 | |||||
I don't lose
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IP: F74A 5C03
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shoulda punched in the la la la's in the hook. kept the last la a lil longer for an overlap woulda been tighter....but it was nice....liked how you came in the first verse.....the second verse didnt come in as hard.....its a good song, just doesnt sound like something you care about and it doesnt seem your in an angry mood, so it just sounds like its missing something.....the track is good, but it needs more time put into it, its like one of those almost there tracks....but an almost there track for you is like a 8/10 for the rest of the kids here......good shit. but i expect more from you
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dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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08-01-06, 07:19 AM | #13 | ||||
Hell yeah
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man Q dont know how come but lately youve been only 10/10 songs seriously, each time you post i download them, when are you making a new mixtape???? cuz i really want it, the beat is fucking hot, where did you get it, i love th4e hook and the lalala thing, flow is dopeee, quality is good too, damn props for your tracks
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08-01-06, 01:31 PM | #14 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: 2B7A 2084
^^preciate the feed
As for a mixtape, I have no idea man. I need some inspiration I guess. Holla 1 |
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08-01-06, 01:51 PM | #15 | ||||
I don't lose
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IP: F74A 5C03
haha mayne....cain n abel.....expected release....jan 07'
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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