Hook x2
Gatherin Smiles That Have Slipped
Kisses Lost And Hugs That I Miss
Regainin Your Soul In My Presence
My Love Bears The Spark Of You Essence
Never Said, Never Told You I'd Wait
And It's Come To A Cliff Were It's Too Late
Since You Lost Grasp, Out Of Sight
Knowin You're Never Comin Home Tonight

Intro To Verse
The Clouds Gather, The Gods Tear For A Soul Departed
Paint A Portrait To Show The World How This Story Started

Verse 1
Birds Shirping, Birth On This Earth, You Heard Workin
A Seed Had Sprouted, A Mother Shouted, But It's All Worth It
For Fifteen Minutes, Twenty Seconds, Came A Blessing
Life's A Book, And This Was Only As Read, Another Lesson...
Although The Parents Took A Different Course, Signed Divorce
Behind Remorce Was A Mother And A Child, See Love Is Force
She Run A Torch And Handed Down Values To Her Only Child
Later To Be Known The Dad Came Back....After Being Gone For A While
And Everything Was Beauty, It Was Simply And Truly
A Wonder Of God, For There Was No Violence, Hate, Or Cruelty
Whent Out And Left A Note, Honey I'll Be Back, I'm Gone
But He Never Knew That She Wouldn't Be Comin Back Home

Hook x2
Gatherin Smiles That Have Slipped
Kisses Lost And Hugs That I Miss
Regainin Your Soul In My Presence
My Love Bears The Spark Of You Essence
Never Said, Never Told You I'd Wait
And It's Come To A Cliff Were It's Too Late
Since You Lost Grasp, Out Of Sight
Knowin You're Never Comin Home Tonight

Verse 2
Drivin Swiftly, Hittin Up Fifty, To The Day Care Center
Under Rain, Suddenly Felt Someone Strike Her Back Fender
Dogding And Swirvin Left To Right, Let's Place This Wreck Aside
To Her Husband Who Decided To Meet Up After His Exericise
So While Driving, He Reaches Traffic, Gets Out To Look Past It
It Seems To Be A Vehicle, Flipped And Torn, Wait! Can't It?
No It Couldn't, As He Dashes Through People To The Scene
Only To Find, Fataly Injured, It's The Girl Of His Dreams
So Holding Her Close, To The Point He Can Hear Her Breath
He Breaks Into Tears, It's Thunderng, And He's On His Knees
A Croud Gathers, While Feelings Cluster The Tragedy
For Who Would Imagine Such Thing Would Be For This Family
Then He Hugs Her The Last Time, Places A Kiss On Her Lips
As She Departs, How The Hell Do You Tell This To Your Kid......

Hook x2
Gatherin Smiles That Have Slipped
Kisses Lost And Hugs That I Miss
Regainin Your Soul In My Presence
My Love Bears The Spark Of You Essence
Never Said, Never Told You I'd Wait
And It's Come To A Cliff Were It's Too Late
Since You Lost Grasp, Out Of Sight
Knowin You're Never Comin Home Tonight

i'll have my links up soon

wow! This was real good, i really like your vocab and tyhe whole topic. it's pretty creative. good job

uppin for some more feedback...thanks for the feed shady lady, thought you weren't gonna come back....

yeah, i didn't like the first verse very much, wasn't really accurate, i think, you weren't really specific with your lines in altering the story...on the other hand, the secnod verse had some great emotion, it was put together nicely mainly because you weren't trying to force inners, i got into it, you're getting better, but still need to work on staying totally focused on the topic, make every line contribute, don't waste a single one! but good, the hook was cool too ,probly be better in audio, keep up

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