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Old 02-08-04, 09:19 AM   #1
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collabo wit Shotta and R-Stonzes, let me kno what yall think...

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Old 02-08-04, 09:49 AM   #2
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Beat is dope as hell... I like this Cassidy shit... Ya' flow, mic presence, voice, and quality is on point... Lyrics is coo'... Nuffin' special but they hot... You nice, boy boy... This other cat is corny... No hate or nuffin, but everything on his part was ass... Except his quality... Thats the only good thing on his part... Keep it up, kid... Stay Up...

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Old 02-08-04, 08:53 PM   #3
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ass? maybe u didnt get some of the shit i sed...
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Old 02-08-04, 09:12 PM   #4
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ok shotta, the first guy was good

but when it came to you........the song dove like a duck from the oldschool nintendo game duck hunt

you have no feeling in your lyrics, your flow is off, delivery was weak....

but the other guy was cool
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Old 02-08-04, 09:16 PM   #5
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First guy was good... Second guy was wack... Simple as that...
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Old 02-09-04, 02:41 AM   #6
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Iono who is first and who is second. So here goes.

First cat : Presence is felt. Simple lyrics, commercial style, but fits the beat obviosully. Once ya voice develops definitely got potential. Flow is straight, pretty easy to ride this beat. Nuthin to complain i mean, it was straight.

Second cat : On beat..kinda...no mic presence though, sound like you straight readin off the page. After the first cat, your delivery and presence reminds me of bizare from d-12. How everyone comes in nice, then he comes in half tlakin, half asleep.

nothing HORRIBLE here. Heard alot worse.

Just work on the delivery.

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Old 02-09-04, 03:42 AM   #7
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listenin... beat ill as phuck
style = nice.. hear this type of flow alot but shits koo...
im feelin this track but wouldnt bump it on a daily
but nice work main
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Old 02-09-04, 03:23 PM   #8
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yea good lookin on the constructive feedback
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Old 02-09-04, 03:39 PM   #9
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wooooo, okay, this beat is fire. your levels is mega loud though, turn yourself down, word of advice, most songs have the beat at a higher level than the lyrics. but shit is hot, the first verse is all on point. the second one i dont know. overall, the piece is nice playa. keep at it.

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Old 02-09-04, 08:48 PM   #10
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beat is alright, delivery is not bad...flow is cool...turn down ur vocals a bit ...lyrics r tight...keep it up



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