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Old 04-03-03, 06:51 PM   #1
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This was my reply to the battle :: Billy vs. De Niro . . .

heres the link to the battle to help my reply make more sense . . .
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=36932


Figured it could help some of y'all out too . . .


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Originally posted by Mind Theory
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billy- "and fuck multies.......they make you sound pretty...
fatlip i appreciate the vote but this is a battle...
punchlines, metas, and wordplay is what counts"


^^TRue. . . but when you got good punchlines, metas, wordplays, AND MULTIES . . . thats when u gotta an ill verse that people are gonna have a hard time beating . . .^^^


anyways, billy obviously won, better everything . . .


Deniro, you should never underestimate anybody . . . thats why I have never been beaten cause I come my hardest againt WHOEVER it is im battling . . . whether it was SirPimpin (lol), X Ecution, or The best cat on this site (whoever that is) . . .



BIlly, nice Improvement . . .

I have a few suggestions . . .

People dont realizze how just changing around a few words in a punch can make it hit 5 times harder . . . for instance . . .

instead of - Bro.... "analyze" your rhymes.. " De Niro"/

you coulda put somethin like -

blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah parylyze cats/
"De Niro" brings wack verses in "pairs" like "sequels" . . . "Analyze That"//

^^just an example^^


This is to everybody and anybody readin this . . . take the concepts u have and word it so the punch hits as hard as it can . . . cause a concept can can be a wack punch or an ill one dependin on how u structure it/


also when u have 2 lines that rhyme, put the stronger line 2nd . . .


for instance. . .

Are you writing with "one butt-cheek" on the seat cause your doin it "half-assed"/
Illogical "punchlines" that i "dont understand" so imma "laugh last"/


should have been . . .


Illogical "punchlines" that i "dont understand" so imma "laugh last"/
Are you writing with "one butt-cheek" on the seat cause your doin it "half-assed"/

it woulda hit harder . . .

Just a few helpful suggestions to anyone who's readin this . . .


MY VOTE BILLY
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Old 04-08-03, 03:47 PM   #2
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Old 04-13-03, 12:50 AM   #3
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Old 04-16-03, 09:44 AM   #4
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i just want to agree with everything that Mind Theory has just said. i believe he is totally correct. you also have great suggests.and yes i would have to say that my vote got carried off by billy as well. good spit. keep up the good work all.
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Old 04-24-03, 02:48 PM   #6
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im bored . . .






uppin this shit for the wackness emergencies . . .
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Old 04-25-03, 10:29 AM   #7
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lol good shit man...

u got some punches dogg

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Old 04-26-03, 09:43 PM   #8
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lol thanks
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Old 04-26-03, 09:47 PM   #9
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lol read the advice billy



. . . you need it . . .




lol siiimmply delightful . . .
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Old 04-26-03, 09:52 PM   #11
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I Hate You......

And Your Dreadfully Awful.......LOLOL
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y'all should make this a sticky
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Godd shit Mind.......but I cant have advice directed tword a specific member as a sticky......but this is what you should do

Make a Battling 1.0.3, with good advice like this, if it has the same reaction from people then I will stick it up..........thanks for the advice to peeps......This is the final reply

Good Shit Mind....keep it up

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