I don't think underground music is the best, I think Cali music is wack because most rappers who rap that style aren't good, like you. Hear a song from me? Nah that's cool, I already know this fourth ever track im bout to do is better than anything you've ever recorded, trust me buddy that single sylable rhyme scheme became wack a long time ago.

you claim ya shit is better.. but let no one hear it...............now that is wack along time ago

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southbeachmiamiho

Bro it's not good enough to let people hear, but it's still better than your shit, ya dig? My mic is crap, whenever I can get good quality, do some shit in a studio wtvv then i'll show you watsup, 'til then Enstinctz can keep rhyming one word to one word in each consecutive bar and think he's tight

garrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrboooo... youa bitch ass... i wouldn't claim my shit is better than everyone elses then let no one hear it...

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southbeachmiamiho

That's cuz your shit isn't better than everyone elses...

And homie don't listen to my shit, listen to yours. If you're better than me, then I fucking suck, and you still suck a bit less so you shouldn't be too concerned bout me, focus on getting yourself better trust me.

i aint claimen that.. you is... then you say nah.. you can't hear it yet... you said your tracks is hotter than mine and enstinctz... i just find it hard to bieleve

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southbeachmiamiho

You also find it hard to believe that you're wack, so go figure.

^UH-OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

and nothing wrong with not posting up tracks you don't think are your best work. I know a lot of people who've done that starting out. They just record a few tracks till they got it and then post it up. My first few tracks i didn't show anybody except a few, same with Triple_N and others i've talked too.

and i've heard his shit, and i agree with him. Of course he still has a lot of shit to work on, cuz it's only his 3rd recorded verse, but it's much less work than you have left alvin

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Its wack, style is so basic, the beat is garbage, and the entire concept is ass.

A New york opinion for you

^^^^lol comin from a new yorker haha.......in this entire thread theres like 4 haters...yall dont phase me yall cant be me....u cant shine like me.....im doin my thang ...your not.....jtr is a faggot nuff sed .....post a track any my tracks would shit on you....and if u dont got structuer in your verses then u wack nuff sed.....

wasn't feeling the beat too tough

vocals sound a bit too loud on the first verse and the chorus...

both of you on the track i aint feelin lyrically, but fair enough tracks like this aint supposed to be too lyrical anyways i guess...iunno just seems like theres somethin missing on the whole though and oh yeah it stopped too abruptly you coulda echoe'd "west coast" at the end or somethin just to give it a smoother exit

you from UK so he's gonna tell you your opinion aint good either lmaoo