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Old 02-03-06, 08:30 PM   #1
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I'll Jack your life like all these debts who slept with you n crept away
Wont accept no for an answer cos i've swept your life away, hey
Every day i wonder why your raps is like you force it
Cos your crap just has no source it stinks like shit, i'd call it horses
Course its just the way you do it so i wont stop you from talkin'
I suggest you keep on walkin' cos my deep shit keeps you hawkin'
I'll crack your face wide open and leave you hopin for a myricale
This lyrical mind, has kept you blind just While you 'Heard it all
You'll get Shot on the Spot, I'd let you rot cos its a blood fest!
And fuck your bitches daily cos the pay me, Wheres that blood test??
i'll let the mud rest, And watch your grave saying "Hes brave"
Its a shame you had to die cos you was such a fucking slave!
Lick 'Deez Nuuts' Cos these sluts have asked me out on a, date
Wait, I think shes bout to change her mind, Check us conversate
"Hey now i've got a problem, "You Punk, You've got no condoms?"
Well all the shops is shut, What do i do?, "Just Duck N Rob Them!"
I'm not a criminal, Got something else?? "Nah Get A Job Then!"
It Aint that easy though, Girl lets get down, " Your Just A Slob When
You wanna get a little bitta' this, You couldn't Handle"
Watch me as i work, "You Jerk" You Bitch, Go Get the candle.."
Now thats how it was, and, this is how it is...
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Old 02-03-06, 08:36 PM   #2
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Old 02-04-06, 04:36 PM   #3
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Was it really that hard to think of a title after writing all that

You sound like you got some issues that need sorting out quick.

Keep it Cummin
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Old 02-04-06, 10:34 PM   #4
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WTF i'd name this guide to getting a venerial dissease

In rap when they mean they're "ILL" they don't mean it as in i got every STD on the planet

Work on making sense instead off rhyming this should be posted in freestyles it has no hook or second verse its just a verse
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Old 02-05-06, 10:04 AM   #5
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nah,,, as a bttle spit, this wud b hot


his deep rhymes r nyc....... grims post sum deep rhymes innit
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Old 02-10-06, 01:27 AM   #6
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feelin sum... cant stress that condoms are essential enough tho it seems to be everywhere in these txt rapz lately
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Old 02-10-06, 01:29 AM   #7
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a battle spit? are you serious? it would suck ass.......but i's pretty descent homie.....
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Old 02-10-06, 01:45 AM   #8
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this had a nice way of coming and going rhyming... but other than that lyrically this was lacking... there were no real stand alone lines, or stanzas... tech's right this would not look good in a battle...
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