This is a track I did with a group named Property Tax

Pacc on the first verse
Explicit on the second verse
Mc Wicked on the third verse
Champ on the hook

This is WAR!!!

LEAVE LINKS AND ILL HIT EM UP

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FINALLY, sum niggas wit the same mentality as me. Theres nuttin but hood in me and it mirrors in ur song. wasn't feelin the beat in the beginnin, but when the hook came on..I was like O SHIT! Thats whats really hood!!! Dont like the first dude. But the chick sounds like shawnna. nice. HOOK IS FIYAH THO!!.....(lemme stay on topic now)....Wicked. I wasn't feelin u that much. u just gotta work on ur flow and take off the effects on ur voices. make it sound like the hook. then it'd be str8. overall i give it a 6/10

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Knuckels. I got a hell of a hand, u still developin man.//
I'll have you leavin' the ring lookin' like the elephant man.//

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i wasn't feeling the beat at all......the first dude doesn't have a rappin voice and ain't good lyrically. the hook lyrics were good but you didn't deliver good. the girl needs to remove that effect on her voice, it's annoying as fuck! and you, god damn! that had the worse effect in the world and that acapella was horrible...wtf? i couldn't understand shit........you need to elevate homie.....

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beat is waaaaaaaaack.... first dude is wack, flow is sloppy, quality sucks like crack whores.... delivery n lyrics weak. hooks gay.. second dude blah fuck this shit man sorry but i cnt take no more, this is horrible.

i wasnt feeling the delivery and the beat if you can fiv that and then show the song, then ill have a better reply to do for you..but untill then...elevate

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the production on this needs major work... best waz da chorus but thatz still weak compared to sum of tha fyre catz are producin these days....

overall u gota get that sound clean, ive heard sum dope grimy shit but tha devil wouldnt sleep in this stank pit

kinsa true. U sound like tech tho. Ur style reminds me so much of his.

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Knuckels. I got a hell of a hand, u still developin man.//
I'll have you leavin' the ring lookin' like the elephant man.//

I fucked up on that last verse I posted the wrong take so yall aint hearing the right shit. but what yall are hearing is hella whack from me. when I get time Ill upload the remastered version

oh and LMFAO at everyone saying that girl needs some work..... Thats a dude and im gonna rip on him from all these coments

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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2651260

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221181

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lol......at the fact that it wuz a guy not a girl.....damn......

pz

~1~

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lmao....i sound nothing like this.....i'd give your ear infections from so much dope shit i drop

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