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Old 02-05-06, 08:09 PM   #1
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Exclamation "You Scared" By Black City

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[V:1]
i gotta love for tha game and i cant contain it
its like i spit it formally, it dont need explainin
it like dat rap fans catchin my drift, they needed a shift
from all tha crappy tracks dat they considerin hip
i considered a dip and went under tha ranks
but goin under only made me have to choose my fate
it was either, live or die, homie swim or drown
so i chose tha good and put whateva else was bad down
i cant lose, it aint in my competitive blood
so on dis track, imma reach sumthin more than tha hood
cuz dont no one group fiend, tha othas do too
so on dis beat im exposin tha truth
knockin tha wheels off tha booth loose, rollin down rythym
killin ya settle feelins so get up and pay full attention
cuz dis time, b city gone shine
and dispose of these wack cats tryin to take mines

[hook]
imma playboi, but im major as hell
you gotta problem wit me but nigga i cant tell
(you scared) i can see it in ya eyes
(you scared) i can see it in ya eyes
imma playboi, but im major as hell
you gotta problem wit me but nigga i cant tell
(you scared) i can see it in ya eyes
(you scared) i can see it in ya eyes

[V:2]
i bet you in da past life i'd be past trife
im strong enuff to break ya jaw witta fake knife
even my name right, cuz it fits my description
im in da city plus im blacker than zits on jessica simpson
im prone to become more unknown
spittin star wars flows, compare me to a drone
put me alone in my own category of rap
so i can spit hot fiya straight back to back
im on anotha level and i aint talkin bout how tall i am
repeat myself like mike jones and killa cam
cock tha uzi of civilizations while kickin tha devil
beatin hatas down wit shevels and dont get in trouble
blast tha ratchet, knock down trash and get at it
blank expression on my face and disgrace to tha fattest
losin weight from my belly got tha girlies lookin
as i look back as im likin and im lookin

[hook]
imma playboi, but im major as hell
you gotta problem wit me but nigga i cant tell
(you scared) i can see it in ya eyes
(you scared) i can see it in ya eyes

[V:3]
i had a dream like MLK back in tha day like 0-3
dat wit rap i would make a difference in da industry
a lot of people feelin me, maybe cuz i got cash
one call away from a whip, and a step from a bus pass
i want money fast cuz my mind is on my cash
nasty on tha mic so i dont jus spit, i pass gas
pass tha hash from one stupid fiend to tha next
dont do drugs but you'll swear i do when im at yo neck
major material will get respect and i'll make sure
dat our legacy live on like we tupac shakur
thoughts locked on gettin more, nuthin below dat
flows stacked like ally cats on top of a ally rat
we do it back to back like tha bad boy movies
same people, more bread, more knowledge, more groupies
keep it locked like a pair of vice grips
and you can hate if you want, either way we make hits

[hook]
imma playboi, but im major as hell
you gotta problem wit me but nigga i cant tell
(you scared) i can see it in ya eyes
(you scared) i can see it in ya eyes

***dis track has also been recorded...its on my soundclick page...im only lettin yall know cuz i know it looks wack typed out...bump da record and read along, then drop comments...link in sig...easy***

http://community.rapverse.com/showp...235&postcount=9

http://community.rapverse.com/showp...232&postcount=9
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Old 02-05-06, 08:27 PM   #2
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Damn son welcome back. lol Thisshit does look decent on text but listening it flows raw and shit. I loved it.

i want money fast cuz my mind is on my cash
nasty on tha mic so i dont jus spit, i pass gas


Raw ass bar son. 8.5/10 We gotta get at it son. Wordness.
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Old 02-05-06, 09:46 PM   #3
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good lookin LFS...bump
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Old 02-06-06, 04:53 AM   #4
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nah this wernt wak at all, gud use of multi's which ran smoothly, catchy str8 to point hook, didnt go outta topik, formal structure,gud use of volcab

yep...uppin this for a 8.9

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Old 02-06-06, 05:31 PM   #5
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thanx for da feeds...bumppity bump bumppin dis
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Old 02-08-06, 05:12 PM   #6
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bump bump bumppin
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Old 02-08-06, 05:47 PM   #7
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wasnt feelin the hook, but it made sense, had credibility. the verse were good. i like the flow. bumped with it a little. i stumbled a few, but for the most part the bars hit well. punched hard, came good. decent read man.....ill look for yours again...
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Old 02-09-06, 02:01 PM   #8
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good looks fam...bump
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Old 02-09-06, 11:12 PM   #9
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it was pretty good nice flow and good multies but like po it said i wasn't really into the hook that much, but keep at it homie........
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Old 02-10-06, 12:59 AM   #10
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da hookz fyre yo... sum of that rulin tha streets shit

enjoyed dis but im feelin like da verses need a lil more life style... gnaw-mean

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Old 02-10-06, 11:22 AM   #11
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thanx yall...bumppy
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Old 02-10-06, 11:44 AM   #12
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like everyon else has said the multis were decent... there were parts of this that were proorly worded though, kinda through the flow off in those parts... lyrically you got your message across... the hook isn't really a banger... overall this was a decent track though postin' ya verses centered make ya structure look on point... it's still clearly off... other than that... keep doing ya thing... 1
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Old 02-10-06, 04:24 PM   #13
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yer yer this was pretty dope. aint sure if im feelin the hook, but ya flow and multis were nice. you got ya point across well aswell. good job yo
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Old 02-10-06, 04:28 PM   #14
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Yo mad props on yer verse wasn't feelin' tha hook though, good multi's also.
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Old 02-10-06, 07:11 PM   #15
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thanx yall...bump
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