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Old 02-10-06, 07:50 AM   #1
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I Walk Alone

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this tha 1st joint i did back in 2003...

all produced by me... nothin special but sum feed would be appreciated


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Old 02-10-06, 08:00 AM   #2
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Old 02-10-06, 08:01 AM   #3
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Old 02-10-06, 09:55 AM   #4
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where u from in UK???

beat is shit... flow is sloppy, has no structure, delivery is weak.. lyrics are weak, wtf @ this hook??? eewwww... this sounds like spoken word, but done poorly, sorry, just not feeling this at all
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Old 02-10-06, 10:23 AM   #5
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this was very odd
the effects were odd

the beat was odd

ur flow sounds like a record being played backwards

I will give you kudos for being different, but it's unidentifiable.


not feelin it

come with something basic, then build...


this was wack


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Old 02-10-06, 01:19 PM   #6
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ah fuck ya'll lol this da first rap shit i ever did first take...

i got sum up comin, be sure to check it XD

peace

thx 4 da feed
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