umm what did i say

16 lines??

w/e

all rule applies

blind spit



NO UNEXPLAINED VOTES!!!

u almost done?
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typical of u

disappear offline ..............


u take a hella long time to write 16 bars

.................................................. ..........................i jes want both verses drop "same time" fair fo da both of us

dude shut your trap and quit freeposting, I'm at work faggot and I never went offline so shove it

almost done... and where's your big mouth?

yo I PM'd ya so "we could drop at the same time to be fair"

where ya at? fuck fair, you can peep mine all day if you want before you spit


Yo check it

Bring ya weapons cuz Legends & Fictional Stories Bore Me
Like a Bruised up Boxer, you Punch Poorly and Lose Sorely
I used to Deal Drugs to You & Ya Moms, Pops & Little Sister
Only Glass & Crack you know is when you Look in the Mirror
Your fuckin Birth should be classified as a Natural Disaster
Only victims you ever merked... straight Died of Laughter
Dumbass accepted a rematch, shoulda been more Cautious
But what do you expect from someone that misspells "Losses"? (see sig)
I gotta Hand it to ya...(bitch slaps Da_legend in the face)
I spit raps like Book Marks to put Da_Legend in his Place
The fact you take pride in ya win list kinda Disturbes Me
Probably cuz all ya damn wins come from Herbs & Newbies
My flows tight, almost like your girl's ass was Last Night
Your so desperate you tried to contact Tupac to Ghost Write
Now you can add a 2 next to my name on ya Loss List
2$pitacular…..2 dope for you 2 try 2 have Conflict

Be sure to read ma shit carefully....some lines have multiple meanings....if ur smart u'll c em....

*You's no vet* $pit~I've checked your records prick...//
Never been to the hospital..cuz *you really aint dat sick*//
Like [fights w/ roosters] he *views porn* just [looking at cocks]//
Watching dude's "beat it" like that guy who's "wanted by cops"//(Michael Jackson)
[Stays locked inside] his house like niggas in [funeral urns]//
[Aint seen da light] like "dead people" [going to burn]//
[Exposing] this dickface for what he is like when he got castrated//
Cuz maybe if you ELEVATED YOU WOULDNT BE HELLA HATED!!!!//(peep his prof.)
Have u [wrapped in body casts] like groceries in [shoppin bags]//
Sayin ["Holy Shit!"] like an Islamic mass [under Bin Laden's ass]//
Fucks his hand so much his palm's blush whenever its touched//
One punch will have him permanently clutched to a crutch//
Like [hermaphrodites on lonely nights] [go fuck yourself] ight?//
This fuckin termite nerd writes but still cant use words right//

[Finisher]
Punches surround his ass like fags in lust wit his nutsack//
Joka "clowned him" now he has nitmerares whenever da "circus is back"//

(SmokaJoka beat him 5-0)

good verse my man

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let da votes begin
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niiice drop.... impressed. sick personal with the elevate/hate shit LMAO

good luck


votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

opener - spit
closer - tie both were shit...Legend dont use the "finisher" ure
elevated front lines that is newbie shit...no hate just
helping ya
punches - both wack both played but spit wins cuz of one decent
line which was the losses personal
personals - spit
wordplay - legend
vocab - tie
overal - spit

no hate just being real seen a lot better from both of you

please hit up my sig with battle against rapid with honest vote

peace

for crying out ppl..........wutz wit dis site n sleeping?

hit dis battle up yo

fo real.............battles shud have been fully voted on by yesterday

45 views yet no1 votes???...

uppin dis shit

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METAPHORES - Da_Legend
VOCABULARY - tie
PUNCHLINES - $pitacular
STRUCTURE - $pitacular
CREATIVITY - tie
PERSONALS - $pitacular
OPENING - $pitacular
CLOSING - Da_Legend
MULTIES - $pitacular
FLOW - tie

OVERALL - $pitacular

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94506

aight i would give my opinion and shit
and break it the Fuck down but i cant' poll vote

SO i just wanted the Legend 2 know that our battle is reposted so u can drop ya verse
in fronlines

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