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02-28-06, 06:06 PM
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I don't lose
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Call Me....track #2 on the mixtape
IP: 9C2B 06EC
ha the song for the ladies...cuz you just gotta have one on every album, so the girls will buy it too....sad thing is its all free's, tried to write, but it just didnt sound the same so we kept it....any thoughts or suggestions....drop em...thanks
( http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2671705 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2671721 ) i send feedback so give me the same respect CALL ME - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3568370
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 well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead  |
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03-02-06, 07:26 PM
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I don't lose
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IP: 9C2B 06EC
upppin....feedback anyone?
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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03-04-06, 03:49 PM
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I don't lose
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IP: 9C2B 06EC
no love on this track eh?....oh well
if no one gon send feed, one of yall can close it
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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03-04-06, 04:51 PM
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...Jea...
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IP: 0825 899A
since no1 else will elave feed i guess i will...
...to much talkin in the intro, sounds gay, jsut let the beat play in the beginning...you got potential, improve your ridin skills, sum of your flow is off...i dont kow if you first or second tho... 2nd guy, flow is also off in sum spots, good voice...yall both need some more emotion...i like the beat tho...lyrics are decent 3rd dude, also needs to fix flow, these lyrics arent as good as the other two verses...elevate and then drop some other trakks after you improve your flow...youll get better wit time could ya rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223420 |
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03-08-06, 10:01 AM
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OYD
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IP: 64CA 6C26
beat: decent...fits the theme of the track
flow: 1st cat...decent...2nd cat...decent...vocals need more highs...up quality lyrics: nothing special either way...throw in a sick meta or two overall: hackneyed and cliche...you didn't put a new spin on an old idea...decent...I can also hear your Cool Edit noise redux... 6/10 |
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