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Old 06-02-04, 04:23 PM   #16
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Auctually idiot i would have not.
Because he did not EXPLAIN the VOTE dont you get it you fucking dick
Good , you decided to beef with me . . i dont fucking care i was waiting for you to blow there are RULES if there broken then they dont count no shut up , period.
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Old 06-02-04, 04:25 PM   #17
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u juss kno u bout 2 lose so u keep takin all da votez away but it dont matter u aient kno good no wayz
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Old 06-02-04, 04:31 PM   #18
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oh and pol if you SWAY like that again .. I will pm strobe and let him know you were kicked out the tourney for cheating.
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Old 06-02-04, 04:48 PM   #19
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Yo imma give this to Prolifik here.. Heres how i break it down..

PROLIFICK
u juss lost might as well delete yo self from dis tournament...
u gettin embaraseed go back 2 m-section from discourgment...
Not bad... 7/10
i take yo soul like mortal combat.. and leave it in "skriptz"....
then pass it verse back..right after ur lyrics easly get ripped...
Not bad again..Nice play on the name 8/10
throwing disconnected punches like his fist and wrist not connected...
i advance 2 da next round while he go 2 tutorial for some corrections....
good punch 8/10
teach u a lesson..verses gettin destroyed like his linez in lethal injection...
give u in affection..then bitchslapp u back 2 front linez to a new section...
good multis, but second part i didnt really get 7/10
killin him like fugee holders..polifick here ready roc dis baby back 2 bed....
blow his head off his shoulders..spit his wack lyrics back at him instead...
Like it.. good punch 8/10
..<< better than yo whole verse im da king u juss ruthless pawns...
rapbattles not for u go back 2 chatrooms Ims and try goldMic.com...
Nice... 8/10
tossin u out the deck like jokers. voterz juss give me da vote and u declined..
i dont kno wat im wasteing more my Linez or my time..im ahead u fallin behind..
Nice multis.. 7/10
da only time u catching a Ko is when u playin da ps2 game fight night....
your right u suck at audio and ill think twice about your text types..
Nice closer 8/10


M-SECTION or W/E
My perfect spits hav murdered shit….so I’ll continue to boast…
You’ve got courage but no wisdom… against me at the most..
not too stong here..didnt really get it 7/10
Don’t temp me.. you already know U cant win this..
So after I`m done ripping you..open the bible & pray for forgiveness..
Nice..like it.. 8/10
I’ve acknowledge your wack & I don’t blaim you.. I just blaim ur roots..
Cos the only time he gets girls..is on GTA’s street prostitutes..(sig)
What does the roots have to do with gettin girls? but okay line 7/10
Quit doing text.. its been destroyed , dawg… what happened?
Coz Everyone use to love hiphop… Until you started rappping
nice punch.. liked it 8/10
I’m superb with words.. ya know.. I`m leaving cats lost with a twist
If you quit the game right now… We can say wackness don’t exist
Another good punch 8/10
I`m perfection @ it’s finest & you know my spits do please..
Mannn…the only time he's WRAPPINGS a 'gift' is on christmas eve.
nice..not as strong as your other punches. 8/10
I’m historical , been writing scripts… Since the ages of the Romans
& my punches connect better like... From Dial Up to Cable modems
flow was kinda off.. 7/10
Make no excuses you blow , so . .You never need to remind me..
How can you be that WACK – you joined RB 1 month behind me
pertty wack.. 4/10

Overall here are the tallys
PROLIFICK - 61/80 Percent - 76.25%
M-SECTION - 57/80 Percent - 71.25%

Overall sick spit by both of you.. but Prolifik edged it out by a small margin..

Vote - Prolifick

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Old 06-02-04, 05:44 PM   #20
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Old 06-02-04, 05:54 PM   #21
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iight


Polifick's Flow And Punches Had Much More Effect On M-Section his Flow was ok and structure but i think M-Section Came away wit Structure And Flows BUt Polifick had The Punches what People Look For thats whats Hittin Hard and Personols {polifick} came with those to

Break Down

Flow--- M-Section
RHymes--- Polifick
Punches---Polifick
Wordplay---M-Section
Structre--- M-Section
All Around BEtter vErse---Polifick

Vote---V/Polifick


Explained Good ENough or want me to add on?
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Old 06-02-04, 05:56 PM   #22
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Nah thats fine....
White powder i allowed that vote cos you broke it down

Can some vets vote now
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Old 06-02-04, 06:24 PM   #23
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i take yo soul like mortal combat.. and leave it in "skriptz"....
then pass it verse back..right after ur lyrics easly get ripped...
I’ve acknowledge your wack & I don’t blaim you.. I just blaim ur roots..
Cos the only time he gets girls..is on GTA’s street prostitutes..(sig)

^^nice punches and they was some god personals and humoris

flow-Tie
closer-Pol
opener-Pol
punches-Pol
structure-Pol
personals-Pol
creativity-Pol
enjoyment-Pol


juss lost might as well delete yo self from dis tournament...
u gettin embaraseed go back 2 m-section from discourgment...
i take yo soul like mortal combat.. and leave it in "skriptz"....
then pass it verse back..right after ur lyrics easly get ripped...
throwing disconnected punches like his fist and wrist not connected...
i advance 2 da next round while he go 2 tutorial for some corrections....
teach u a lesson..verses gettin destroyed like his linez in lethal injection...
give u in affection..then bitchslapp u back 2 front linez to a new section...
killin him like fugee holders..polifick here ready roc dis baby back 2 bed....
blow his head off his shoulders..spit his wack lyrics back at him instead...

^^nice verse had me laughing and your punches was hard.....some was kinda lame but for the most part the shit was hot and i liked your structure and you flow was goin along ill......keep it up man

v/POL
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Old 06-02-04, 06:32 PM   #24
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wow just wow - nope.

You brokedown his verse down and ignored mine or mixed the mortal kombat line that was a clear dick ride or a clear hate maybe because you're out the league..... that's defently not counting

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Old 06-02-04, 06:38 PM   #25
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BREAKDOWN

Polifick
a gud drop, u came strong in this battle. u had a gud structure, nuthin too stretched and that gave u a nice flowing verse from beginning to end. u had punches in there, some were average but a lot of them were solid and they all connected well. u had the personals in there to and all were gud and u had some gud creativity in ure drop. an all round gud performance. OVERALL 8/10

M-Section
playa......u to dropped a hott ass verse. i liked it all, u had a gud structure to and ure verse flowed hott from start to finish, i think i was feelin ure verse more to cuz i think ures flowed better. u had punches from start to finish and all were hittin hard minus a couple of average blows. ure verse was similar all the way to polifick's i just think u had a couple of harder punches and personals, and i think u showed a little more creativity in ure drop. OVERALL 8.5/10

V/ - M-Section
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Old 06-02-04, 07:01 PM   #26
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breakdown:

polifick:

u juss lost might as well delete yo self from dis tournament...
u gettin embaraseed go back 2 m-section from discourgment...
^^good opener nice personal 7/10
i take yo soul like mortal combat.. and leave it in "skriptz"....
then pass it verse back..right after ur lyrics easly get ripped...
^^another good personal and punch 7/10
throwing disconnected punches like his fist and wrist not connected...
i advance 2 da next round while he go 2 tutorial for some corrections....
^^str8 shyt but the tutorial line is played 5/10
teach u a lesson..verses gettin destroyed like his linez in lethal injection...
give u in affection..then bitchslapp u back 2 front linez to a new section...
^^not too hott with multies decent punch 4/10
killin him like fugee holders..polifick here ready roc dis baby back 2 bed....
blow his head off his shoulders..spit his wack lyrics back at him instead...
^^1st line good the ending of line 2 is played also 5/10
..<< better than yo whole verse im da king u juss ruthless pawns...
rapbattles not for u go back 2 chatrooms Ims and try goldMic.com...
^^just weak 3/10
tossin u out the deck like jokers. voterz juss give me da vote and u declined..
i dont kno wat im wasteing more my Linez or my time..im ahead u fallin behind..
^^str8 bar good punch good wordplay 7/10
da only time u catching a Ko is when u playin da ps2 game fight night....
your right u suck at audio and ill think twice about your text types..
^^good closer decent punch 6/10

overall : 44/80

m-section:

My perfect spits hav murdered shit….so I’ll continue to boast…
You’ve got courage but no wisdom… against me at the most..
^^good shyt nice wordplay feelin this 7/10
Don’t temp me.. you already know U cant win this..
So after I`m done ripping you..open the bible & pray for forgiveness..
^^bible lines played 2nd line stretched 5/10
I’ve acknowledge your wack & I don’t blaim you.. I just blaim ur roots..
Cos the only time he gets girls..is on GTA’s street prostitutes..(sig)
^^lol good personal felt this bar 8/10
Quit doing text.. its been destroyed , dawg… what happened?
Coz Everyone use to love hiphop… Until you started rappping
^^consistent punches good shyt 8/10
I’m superb with words.. ya know.. I`m leaving cats lost with a twist
If you quit the game right now… We can say wackness don’t exist
^^anyother good punch not as hott as others 6/10
I`m perfection @ it’s finest & you know my spits do please..
Mannn…the only time he's WRAPPINGS a 'gift' is on christmas eve.
^^wrapping lines are played 4/10
I’m historical , been writing scripts… Since the ages of the Romans
& my punches connect better like... From Dial Up to Cable modems
^^good shyt nice punch 7/10
Make no excuses you blow , so . .You never need to remind me..
How can you be that WACK – you joined RB 1 month behind me
^^good personal decent closer 7/10

overall : 52/80

vote: m-section

i think his punches came harder had better wordplay structure was better...prolifick took the personals category cuz m only used one...wordplay from both was sick tho..
and both verses were pretty consistent...but i think Ms punches just came harder


can someone drop a honest vote on flow intelligent vs. shadows edge in thsi text tourney ty

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Old 06-02-04, 10:43 PM   #27
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Aiyo..

PoLiFick: 6/10
Your Verse Had Sum Pretty Hard Punches and Your Metaphors Were Nice. Flow Was ALright and You Didn't Have Many Mulits. I Liked The Mortal Kombat Line..Word Usuage You Coulda Improved On...Nice Verse Overall.

M-Section: 5/10
You Had Sum Filler Lines and Man Those Last Two Bars Killed You...They Were Horrible and Made Your Spit Shit At The End. You Had Sum Decent Punches Threwout The Verse...Nice Wordusuage..But Vocab and Metas Need Work. Nice Verse Overall.

Vote - PoLiFick Due To Better Punches and Metaphors

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Old 06-03-04, 07:46 AM   #28
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Old 06-03-04, 10:27 AM   #29
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Quote:
Originally Posted by PoLiFicK
u juss kno u bout 2 lose so u keep takin all da votez away but it dont matter u aient kno good no wayz

Nevermind You're now kicked out the tourney for cheating.
Obviously you thought you can break rules go PM strobe and complain if you wish.
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Old 03-25-05, 05:19 PM   #30
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enhance is a bitch haha...polifick merk him...
 
 


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