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Old 06-21-06, 11:17 AM   #1
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Ok so it's week 2. You must drop a minumum of 16 lines and try and keep the amount of lines even ish.

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You MUST pick a topic a topic from the following list, and you can both do different topics. Good luck and drop dope.

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Cleansed by Fire
In Anger... I am Truly Happy
Shards of a Broken Mind
These Shackes are my Freedom
Hope is a Tattered Flag
This Love is my Pain
Of Dust and Air
The King in Chains
Tears, Idle Tears
To Find God
The Moons Shadow
Risen to a New Low
Does the Solder Bleed as much as me?

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Old 06-22-06, 03:43 AM   #2
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ok this dude better show the fuck up!...im tired of no show HO'S!.....

my 3 choice breakdown. so you wont know which one ima do!.
This love is my pain
does the solder bleed as much as me( is it supposed to be soldier?!)
The moons shadow.


hey for the hell of it ima do 2 cus i love this weeks topics!.
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Old 06-22-06, 02:54 PM   #3
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I thought Rush might no show so you're now against Miss Behaving. Good luck
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Old 06-22-06, 02:57 PM   #4
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Checking in

Goodluck
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Complicated emptiness, a hollow lined with pain
nothing enters easily, perplexed they try in vain....


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Old 06-23-06, 04:32 AM   #5
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yea THANKS...ok
request a extention please.....my moms in the hosital car crash thats why so what ay say apo?1..can ya hook me up?!..
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Old 06-23-06, 11:23 AM   #6
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yea THANKS...ok
request a extention please.....my moms in the hosital car crash thats why so what ay say apo?1..can ya hook me up?!..


Sure, would Sunday be ok?
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Old 06-25-06, 07:25 PM   #7
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Enamoured Anguish

He lay in state, the state of death, or at least so close to it she quivvers
knowing the moment draws near where she will lose him forever.
Never more to see him fragile smile, as he'd try not to laugh when she'd miss
an easy shot at pool, or, when she'd offer a giggle and spantanious kiss.

Hanging to his life-sparce existence and her too weak to cut the rope
and watch death drag him away silently, leaving her alone to cope.


How far removed he seemd lying there, all she can do was blankly stare
as his eyes would flicker like a cheap motel sign- but not sign he was aware.
Left to bear the brunt of his accident, by his side til death do they part
his lifeless state left her helpless and pale, as she wait for him to depart.

Hung between worlds his frail soul lingered, coming, going, swaying
she bore witness to his suffering, crying, hoping, praying.


His broken body faltered and she felt his chest rise and fall,
waiting for the rise again, in vain, no movement at all.
Doctors and nurses rush in to bring him back for her once more
she shook her head numbly, and slumbed down on the floor.

Hung head, weeping into the pillow next to the empty shell of him,
life-void, his suffering finally over, her heartache still continuing.
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Old 06-26-06, 04:48 AM   #8
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uh no not sunday i have to request another day i dont have enough time for it man...and i dont wanna lose man from a no show so til tomorrow so be patient and trust it'll be worth the read so please 1 more day

Appo: Ok, I'll leave this battle open this week when I set up the new battles. Btw thanks for dropping Lizzy, I really appreciate it.
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Old 06-26-06, 09:29 PM   #9
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This love is my pain.

Paved to an extant of a life unclear
as the vision of the mission is impaired to disappear
life's not in the means for disgruntal games
as the name is re-embersed to a bloody teared picture frame.
the scent of rose dew melting onto the pot
of broken dreams and hidden scenes that's left in the same slot
drop!....my heart crawls and quivers
as the emotion that is struck is the god thunder that shivers.
tingles down my spine, bitten nails to quake
as i impatiently collide with fear, my whole life begins to shake
eye's color'd red wth detailed pastel black.
as the point of this is, is to describe that there's no turning back
captured in this image of lost love that i cant budge
rushed off this lone cliff with no one to turn to with LOVE.
as my emotions are stepped on literature strikes
as the voice that is heard is faded away, as my every day turns from light
with potion sight, blended with this potion might.
i think that this fight, might patiently abide with god's given eternal life.
so i finally budge with this serge of energy trust
as i crutch my thoughts to clutch to the next gear of this love lust
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Old 06-26-06, 11:14 PM   #10
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Pretty goode, pretty goode... I loved and enjoyed readin bothe peices.... Behaving was deep... after readin hers, I was like damn the comp gotta a lot to prove. But Alchemist came thru hard too. Miss B had great imagery, nice plot, and very reflective. Alch had complexed metaphors, and great use of verbage. Alchemist, kinda feel off at the end, while Miss B's stayed interesting all the way thru.... this coulda went either way, but overall I'mma have to say Miss B. winner- Miss Behaving
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Old 06-27-06, 12:22 AM   #11
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i didnt even see this, wow.

no pm or nothing?

good job running the league man.
 
Old 07-04-06, 12:22 AM   #12
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Tim..wins

its not my responsibilty 2 infrom u when your battle is

U kno the check and drop dates..

Do i log on and post 4 u?...No

Nuff said

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Old 07-04-06, 11:31 AM   #13
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word. ok. yea miss sorry for you having to drop but....yours was nice to.
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