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Aight......dis ya boy RaDiKaL........da Nati kat.....(513)...ayo,I came here ta drop somethin on dese mothafuckas......oh yeah,by da way.......IM BAAAACCCCCKKKKK........lets go......

(RaDiKaL)
Im da talk of ya ~neighborhood~ so just ~say Im good~
cause Im gonna ~stay for good~ doin what a ~playa should~
Then I ~later would~ spray weapons where da ~haters stood~
so yall get outta my face cause ya dont want me ta ~blaze da wood~
I was ~chose ta promise~ dat I would make my ~flow da hottest~
leavin dese rap dudes 'in a box stiff' like ~'frozen products'~
Dis is hot ~merchandise~ ta see me,you'll need ~searchin lights~
cause me and sickness 'go together' like ~church and christ~
Dese niggas dat wanna battle me'll get smacked ~worse than Ike~
cause on a mic,Im leavin you 'clowns beat up' like ~'circus fights'~
And I aint da ~nervous type~ dats just spittin what a ~person likes~
dis was on ~purpose,dikes~ yall only think ya 'tight' cause ya ~shirt is tight~
Im ~packin da bigger glocks~ ~attractin da bigger flocks~
doin all dat and more just ta place you ~cats in a litterbox~
Yall aint hot,Im #1 in millions,yall ~raps are da middle spots~
so Im ~clappin you wit da shots~ for da ~fact dat you niggas not~

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YALL ALLREADY KNOOOOWWWW(yep)
YALL ALLREADY KNOOOOWWWW(uh-huh)
YALL ALLREADY KNOOOOWWWW(okay)
YALL ALLREADY KNOOOOWWWW(Nati)

Chea......chea......chea.....chea......

(RaDiKaL)
As I think of da ~dead rappers passed~ and yall ~instead rap dis trash~
Im leavin some dudes wit a 'tag on em' like a ~bed mattress has~
Critics couldnt stop me,~nor will others~
cause I was da 'first ta take flight in rap' call me 1 of da rap ~Orville Brothers~
If yall dont ~wanna get sprayed some~ then ya better ~run when dat day come~
cause Ill leave you wit enough 'holes' ta look like da ~front of some A1's~
Yall dont want me ta start ~spittin my gauge at all yall~
cause dat shit really'll leave you ~'Sittin Sideways' like Paul Wall~
Dese haters gon make me ~let those heats~ pop til they ~chest go deep~
cause they mad dat Im sittin on 20s and they sittin on ~Metro seats~
Come on,yall niggas ~cant see dis~ mad cause ya ~cant be dis~
Im sittin here ~crazy rich~ while yall 'so broke dat ya ~cant be fixed~
But I still aint ~forgot da hood~(no) still aint ~forgot da wood~(no)
while dese other rappers fake cause they left da ~block for good~
And still rappin ~bout they in it~
but yall know RaDiKaL....dont even need ta ~count da minutes~ cause theres no ~doubt Im in it~

.....just gotta drop somethin for people ta know my name......da new kid..RaDiKaL......ayo,Im outta here.......513.....

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Do you have ta click on somethin ta get feed.......

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Okay.....heres my link......

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2247662

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Thanks dawg.....more feed please....

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More feed please.....dis was my first drop......

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honestly...i lyke seeing something total different in text, but you had a nyce flow going....structure was iight

cause I was da 'first ta take flight in rap' call me 1 of da rap ~Orville Brothers~
^i liked that....

If yall dont ~wanna get sprayed some~ then ya better ~run when dat day come~
cause Ill leave you wit enough 'holes' ta look like da ~front of some A1's~
^im feeling the multis...and metas

aye this wasnt bad at all....you came a lot stronger on the second verse...and started showing what you can do....i see ya, mayne....keep writing....

return the favor if ya havent?....BIRTH OF A GODDESS.

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..:: Artik In The Phlesh::..
.Re-Writing The Re-Run.