help me out, pm me and we'll chat about my rhymes

I tld ya
ya juss need ta Up the vocab
and Bring more punches

Peep my battle with that dude that was talkin shit
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67375

Try to learn from my shit!

aight check out these couple of lines...........

im uppin my vocab, till IM the dictionary,these suckaz think that they parrots but they be canaries// (parotz are birdz that can talk and learn vocab)
imma merk these kidz till all is left is their shoes,why do they bother spitten all they recieve is boo'z//
rewindz da most hated,Ghetto underestimated, im underrated but ive come back elevated//
goin to da top floor fuck takin the stairs, butchu aint comin up cuz u stuck in wheel chairz//

it was aight
peep my battle
learn from that
that's real shit right there

^^^hahaha...fam'z givin' lesson'z now...lol

lol
juss tryin ta help the kid out
i should be help you out
3 losses
what the fuck is wrong with u?
lol

i got 13 wins
1 loss
and i'm in 2 battles right now
Mr. Criscapo
and Feeble Minded

^^^those were my first 3 battles since I came back to the site...I think I shoulda won 2 of em against Bombz...

lol it's straight dawg
but yo dont post in here anymore
this is so i can tutor the kid!

^

didn't u get pinkslipped ?

ugh no............
What the fuck u talkin bout Franchi$e?
if i got pinkslipped i woudln't be here

Something Tells me Merking King Did get pinkslipped aka IllestKilla

Whateva its all good he got talent. But anyway d-krew try and get some multis in there too

^ He's not pinkslipped, he's still here. .

don't learn from him! haha jp do what ya wanna do but i'm better! lol

^^lol Conflict how u gone say u better than me when i beat u 5-1?