10-16 lines
blind spit
due time
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no d.r votes
or recylin or bitin..

pc

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dropping soon...post your shit by tonite

goodluck

Aite here we go....

This turds-gays my verbs-displace watch this jerk-get-framed,
Jacka got his 'sentences' on 'stage' but still got no fucking 'word-play'/
This homo reps-the-dykes devour his flesh-in-a-fight,
Having 'Jordan Shoes' is the only way he 'steps-up-with-a-mike'/ (mic)
Like body builders jacking off you bout to get beat-severly,
This fool is like a 'mailman' with broken arms, with that 'weak-delivery'/
Mocking-ya-crew got davids star in a socket cause I am shocking-this-jew,
Its like I am 'walking through Alphabet', the way I am 'stomping-on-U'/
Got your moms-wet he's fuckin the wrong-sex, on ya verse i place bomb sachels,
This Aint Bruce but im bout to put a L after ya name cause u a fuckin JackaL/ L=Loss
Guess what? you lost-drag, look at ya casket its engulfed-with-frags,
He's a soft-fag, cause only NINES ya got are the ones in ya golf-bag!/
This bitch gave extra, but still aint getting any studio-credit,
Watch me kill this 'mother fucker' more times than a 'radio-edit'!!/
Couldnt drop the freshest verse even with using scope-in-ya-rhymes,
Cause you could use a crack addict and still not have dope-lines/
After this battle is through ill be on to the next level so see-ya-lata,
Your career is like avalanches cause this bitch only gets HIMS-TO-LAY-YA!!/ (Himalaya Mountains)
See-the-door, cause like 'Sluts' at School Im bout to teach-this-whore,
These 'whores' are too 'easy' so just fucking send me to the elite-board!!/

goodLuck

Your Truly wak,An a Nu-sense 2 Rap Just Quit Now,Claim Ya Respect..
Cuz Honestly Kid U Cudnt Win If u Verbally raped By the Alphabet..
Far From Bein a Vet,When I said I dont battle Newbs I stand Corrected.
Ya Verse Cudnt Have Stucture nor a Foundation if U magered in ArkeText..
Sub par at text..why continue on when your Verse been Roasted..
Shit TT Ill Give u n E For Effort,an hope to see u Overdosin..
Guess wut Ive got in Stored for your...Nuthin Bitch Your Garbage..
First battle,an u Talkin about Elite Boards,Kid your a Starving Artist..
My Raw Barz Are Hittin Hard an my Punches Knockin u Out Cold..
U Talk about eatin Mc's Like 13 but can barley chew a mouth full..
Skillz r Doubfull.Im Rippin U In a Sequence.Cuz Punches dont Hurt me..
U Cud Sport 42 on ya Back an Play For the Lakers n Still Not Be Worthy..
^^U Mite not Get it.Im way Past my time like my metaphors wit Fixtures..
My 16 Lines will Kill ya novel containing 50 lines of Bullshit Scriptures..
Cud u Picture this.That Im not out To KIll U but out for the Win..
I got Half this shit on Roll..then just ran outta Film..

Jacka looked like he took this

Truest looked like he tried too hard and forced out some of it, Jacka just let it flow I also liked Jacka's last four lines, not like I'm sayin truest didn't do good, but Jacka made it look easy and iddn't try too hard

lol are u kidding hahaha ok ok i didnt read one punch in that verse my wordplay alone murdered him and your not supposed to try hard in battles now lollllll

half my lines are punches buddy
LMAO
u suk dawg damn dont hate cuz r u wak an lost..pc

half your shit is fillers and plus it took you longer than 30 mins...read my verse carefull and everyone is a punch dumbass

Lmao a played ass punch..fillers naw maybe a few lines but really all my fillers are personals kiddo..
your shit is played wit a bunch of weak metaphors..

u suk dawg
your the truest bitch....pc

hey i didn't say you don't have to try, but when you have someone that tried to hard up against someone that didn't make it look hard it just looks better, when you try to hard it looks like you're tryin' to kill the person and i know thats the point but when there's a bunch of those 'this-is-a-punch' things i don't know it just doesn't seem as good of a flow as there could be

hahaha personals HAHAHAHAHAHAHA your so dumb...played lines are u kidding sorrry if you dont get the punches dawg

my vote goes to truest
punches were way better

atomikflo vote my battles its REALL

reaLL theres a poll vote on that...and dumbass this-mean-theres a mutli rhyme hahaha

lol at grief spoken
i say Jacka won because his punches hitt harder
Truest hadd wordplay,
but ya punches were controlled by hooks
and yuck to ya muscle man meta thats gross

vote = da JacKa

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