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Old 10-16-05, 04:53 PM   #1
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Best Topical Battle - September 2005

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Atticus vs. Tweety

In the topical tournament, Verbal Emotions IV, Atticus and Tweety met up for this battle and made it great as it could have been. Both of these competitors have been regarded as some of the best topical battlers to grace the site, so it was no surprise that this battle was a close, and good, one.

The topic for this battle was "Closed Eyes."

Quote:
Originally Posted by Atticus
Got To School... 'The Jock', Care Free.
Greetings Breed This Ego Of Mr. Popularity.
Feet Skip Past Girls With A Cocky Swagger,
Drag A Scene Behind As All These Calves Herd.
I Dance... The Piper, Pipe In Hands,
Man Forms To Rat As Four Light Notes Lift Dams.
The Flood Gates Break, Just Pump Rain Up.
A Sea Of Enslaved People Fills Each Ways Cusp.
They Fallow A Step Back, Question's Asked...
Left And Right, From The Get Go, To And From Class.
Im Idolized Though. My Name's A Grasped Symbol...
The Asterisk To This Cold Place's Blackening Whole.

*Goes To Class*

...Riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing

*Bell Rings And He Leaves Class*

Meet Up All My People Just Before Class.
A Stunning Little Dime Finds A Comfort In Lap.
Bull Shit This Line, "You're Eyes Are Beautiful".
She Smiles, I Sigh... In Mind Already Through The Hole.

....................................

*Kid Walks By, Accidentally Bumps Someone*

"WHAT THE FUCK!?!?! You Fucking Faggot!
Cant You Fucking See? That's My Back Bitch."
He Smacks The Kids Face, Gets A Laugh In Late.
Looks At His Crowd Now For The Packs Embrace.
They, All Love It... So Much Higher Ranked.
The Kid Had That Shit Just Comin... Guys A Waste.

.................................................. ..............

This Bitch Is Fucking Gorgeous... High Class Shit.
"WHAT THE FUCK!?!?! You Fucking Faggot!
Cant You Fucking See? That's My Back Bitch."
Glance Over To See My Mans Hand Sweep.
Cant Even See, But Here A Smack And Laughs Breach.
Everyone Smiles So I Hold No Sign Of My Own.
Fallow, Although When I See This Kid I Broke.
Never Stopped It, As This Kid Flee'd Weeping...
Stared Me Right In The Eyes Before They Shut Out These Things.

*The Next Day*

Just Another Day, Im Great. Why...
Even This Shutter Of Education Is Laid Wide.
All Are For Me, Discard He Who Your Sold On,
I'm Above All, This Communities Bull God.
Not Even Arrogant, See When Its Truth...
These Led Title Used Hold No U-

*EXPLOSIONS RING OUT!!!!*

Cover My Head Up As Rubble Tumble Runs By.
Close My Eyes And Hope The Thunder Subsides.

*A Kid Kicks Open The Doors And Runs In*

The Doors Fly Open, Almost Now Broken.
Hinges Dangles As People Race To The Ground Choking.
The Debris Seize Every Crevice You Can Imagine.
Dirt Sifts Through My Hair As The Air Lands Ravaged.
It Sits There... Ripping Its Filthy Claws At My Iris.
Driving In This Pain Of Not Saving A Tried Kid.

*Gunshots Ring Out/ A Figure Stands At Me*

I Cant See, I Think Someone Come Up In Front Of Me.
SHIT! I CANT FUCKING SEE! "HELP ME PLEASE!!!"

*Figure Speaks...*

"So Blind To Me Until The Time Of Need...
Now It Is I With Eyes Wide Shut And Blind Prestige."

*Closes Eyes... *

...BANG!!!

News Reporter: "On a sunny spring day in April 1999, a suburban high school in Jefferson County, Colorado, found itself under attack by two of its own. In less than fifteen minutes of the first-lunch period on that Tuesday, two student gunmen killed 13 and wounded 21 before they turned the guns on themselves - the most devastating school shooting in U.S. history."


Quote:
Originally Posted by Tweety
-The Sky-

looking down at this havoc, the fear squeezing me so tight,
in fright "why god didn't do anything?" the outcome isn't bright.
darkness corrupting my brain, the ache of pain is what i'm feeing,
trap behind illusion bars-mind blocked- the agony of it is screaming.
disbelieve what I was sensing, I smelled the blood, scream of breath,
stopped- few minutes later I saw that spirit float pass me-signal of death.
Heart broked, tears starts to pour-the sun disappears while I express this,
scorch of hate punches is being thrown but i couldn't reach the object.
The only thing from this point is all i could do was to cry and cry all night,
this emotional nauisance turning me so tense as my tears fall from the sky.

-The Grass-

damn I feel it in the air, tears from above collasping on me,
felt the force wind of the door, still in pain from the hard feets.
i sense someone in the help of need, but what can myself do?,
I'm stuck to the ground, feeling sweaty and smothered by dew.
I remember the tickle I felt coursing down my face-so different,
is this another living thing that I don't know of, damn what was it?
the preasure of that thing turn me upside down, I felt very sadden,
then my roots gave me the clear view-it was blood that has fallen.
"This is a bad night", hard streak of tires scorching up the road,
"there was a bomb here I can feel it, but it already have explode".

-The Road-

rubber is in furious, I'm the feeling the heat ontop of my concrete,
rain pouncing above me, like an tatto by the black ink- i'm asteriske.
little particles of me is being discrete, why you moving so fast driver?,
is it because you witness something that ignite your soul as a lighter?
trying to get away from all the problems, but it's hunting and still in your
soul, wasn't much of a cure and you had to kill the problems of it all-the core.
Are you yearning inside of what you done? Murder your lovely divine rose,
the one who thought that cared about you, but tonight you find out that she's a pose.
Rain getting heavier "O no..damn" "stop please my back is hurting enough,
Pull Over damn it!..The fuck you won't?..Fine then...this is about to get rough"


In the end, Atticus won 3-0 and moved to the next round in the tournament.

Congratulations to the both of you.

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