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03-22-05, 12:35 PM
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Like 8 Minute Keystyle...I'm New...From HHE....
IP: D0B1 D2B1
-I'm patiently waiting having these hallucinations,
thinking of ways without being revealed, to try and pollute the nation- -I can try to make a mark, rejuvenate and restart, but I don't care what happens to mankind, cuz I have a bleeding heart.- -A never-ending black hole, filled wit numerous rap souls, Bruises on the inside of my palms, cuz I attack hoes- -You don't know me, your the exact opposite of a OG, I'll kick lucifer in the ass, and ask him do u want beef?!?- -I alwayz had the fire, the drive, my lifes inspired, to throw illegal rhymes at y'all fags, like when credit cards expire!- -Even if I become the world's greatest rapper, I won't retire, I'm a hip hop legend, stay dressed and all black, like Knights & Squires!- -I never fret, the boy right here is still a threat, and besides none of you can stop me in a battle, i'm nastier than pregnant sex!- -I'm a dismantlin' e-beef, lyrically splittin' e-thugs wigs, and battlin' me will get ya denied, like 16 year olds tryin' to buy Cigs!- -Some of these fake internet thugs, comin' at my head, but they not rappers, these faggots just can't see the light, cuz they got their hoodies on backwards!- ~GhosT~
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03-22-05, 12:44 PM
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IP: 29DB 69F4
umm...im not gonna leave feedback on that...but go here...i replied to your call out but you never responded so go to this thread...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=183051 |
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03-22-05, 01:15 PM
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IP: D0B1 D2B1
leave me alone. IF u wanna battle YOU set it up...and YOU drop FIRST. OTHER THAN THAT.....hop off. ~Ghost~
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03-22-05, 01:21 PM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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IP: 0825 899A
iight it was iight nothing to special except the vocab nice vocab structure was off wordplay was nice to be your first O.M. it was decent just elevate you can only get better with time right. 6/10
btw repay the favor links in sig! |
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03-22-05, 01:25 PM
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New to RV
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IP: D0B1 D2B1
itz old. a while back when I first started texting. it'z a whole different story now. I wanted to see where this sites lyrical content was at. If y'all would have been like "FIRE!!! 10/10. I would have easily taken over. nice to know it ain't a soft site. thanx for the feedback. ~Ghost~
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03-22-05, 01:26 PM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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IP: 0825 899A
yeah fam just remember to repay the favor
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03-22-05, 01:37 PM
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E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: ECB3 36A0
aint u glocks boy?????
u got some aight stuff in that keystyle, few decent metas, vocab n flow was nice, structure could be a little better but yeah, good lookin out, watch for the cock hoppers around the site, an watch for aliases, thats what this site is famous for, but stay up famz Peace
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03-25-05, 10:46 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: A3EA 639E
yeah good drop ur structure was a lil off in spots but overall a nice piece...vocab was there needs a lil elevation in ur wordplay but othawise u have these o.m. drops almost mastered but keep up da good work fam
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