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09-15-03, 09:33 PM | #1 | ||||||
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"Thin line between love and obsession" MUST PEEP THIS REALLY
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For better or worst, we’ll weather the weathers forever together
Never alone, together me and you, we’ll get through whatever Whether it be sickness or health, even poverty or wealth Quote “I wouldn’t let u hit the ground if I was falling myself” I felt her hand, knees trembling, it’s tough to stand Priest began “we’ve come to form a holy union of woman and man” “Place the band, do you take this woman to have and to hold” And instead of saying “I do”, I respond with “hello” ~it was only a dream~ I saw my future in her eyes before she could even say hi Her smile outshined the sky, with her name she replied I told her mine, we spoke of times when we were passer bys Contact with eyes, yet speechless, seems that we both were shy I had realized this girl was special, before I had met her But respectful to MY lady, I wasn’t able to sweat her Still I kept her in my life, my feelings growing deeper within But when my relationship ended, she felt me as only a friend Does art imitate life, or does life imitate art The answer is neither; either that or someone’s not playing their part I’ve seen romantic comedies, movies of drama and action And in the end all of them always finish in passion It’s tough graspin the truth, when your influences are false Of course love aides in masking most of life’s flaws Days passed, we still kicked it, the feelings she not feeling My heart’s hole has me illing, but somehow I’m dealing It’s killing me slowly, not healing, I’m dying inside Alone I occasionally cried, but with her I swallowed my pride Tried changing her heart and mind, many a times But I was at her side, while various guys were feeding her lines They’re telling you lies, I pleaded to her, they’d never treat you like me And you’ll never even know it, unless you try it and see But she really wasn’t hearing me, she stuck to her ways And I moved on to another, but my love never phased Days went away, we chilled less, things weren’t the same But heart has always raced when I’m hearing her name Me in tuxedo, she was looking great in gown We smiled at each as if the only one around Vows were read, hands grasped, priest asked if there was any objection And I sat there in the crowd, bit my tongue while, thinking, reflectin hook(2x) u make me wanna cross the line between love and obsesion the way u not feelimg me im fallin into a deep depression i wanna just hold ya body and keep u in my possesion thas why u make me wanna cross from love and obsession My heart bears her impression, in my mind lays no question That the temptress I'm tempted by is the face of perfection So I stay by her side, tryna grin through depression Forced to cross that thin line between love and obsession We've kindled a friendship, I've garnered her trust But it isn't enough, I'm still harnessed by lust And I've tried to express this without being aggressive But each time that I mention it... I just wind up rejected... I've tried flowers and poetry, sonnets and je.welery Still, it ain't worked... She wants nothing to do with me... For every poem I write, every cent that I spend She'll still never be mine, except as a friend... My soul burns as I yearn for her, my blood churns, my world turns for her Still I've learned it's absurd, my love isn't returned from her... Years have passed, things ain't changed, I'm still head over heels And my lonliness persuades me to forget how she feels I'm a desperate fool for this delicate je.wel And my patheticness grew as her rhetoric cooled She'd grown tired of my endless declarations of adoration Demonstrations of patience, she knew I'd be waiting Forever to get her, interfering with her pleasure Like beating cats up who'd hooked up when they met her I'd stalk her at parties, I'd blow up her cell Till pigs flew and igloos were present in Hell Her father would threaten... "STAY AWAY FROM MY DAUGHTER" But I couldn't ignore her... Not even with a restraining order... My soul burns as I yearn for her, my blood churns, my world turns for her Still, my words didn't work, my love wasn't returned from her... We'd grown up, gone to college, different coasts by design I met people, but her sketch was still etched in my mind Couldn't concentrate, eat, sleep or breathe at such a distance So I packed up my bags and I paid her a visit... The plane ride from L.A to New York was a breeze As I planned out the scene, I would drop to my knees And she'd finally realize the sacrifices that I'd made for her The pain that I'd been through by being away from her She'd embrace me and kiss me, and hold me forever And from that moment on, we'd always be together... So I got off the plane, hopped a cab to her dorm But she sounded afraid as I knocked on her door... "Just a minute" she said, "I'm improperly dressed, SHIT!" Then two minutes went by... I was promptly arrested... Spent a day in a holding cell, and by now I was pissed I'd gone through all this hell, and I'm still getting dissed My soul burned as I yearned for her, my blood churned, my world turned for her And since my words didn't work, I went beserk and I murdered her... HOOK 2x Rb This ones fo history im a rb legend let it be known im a lover 2 Pretty deep topic drop some input |
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09-15-03, 10:06 PM | #2 | ||||||
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uppin fo input
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09-15-03, 11:06 PM | #3 | ||||||
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come on yall i put all my feelings into this and thats all u give me nothin at all
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09-15-03, 11:09 PM | #4 | ||||||
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I really like it its str8
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09-15-03, 11:09 PM | #5 | |||||||
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i liked that shit it looks like you put some serious time into that piece good flow
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09-15-03, 11:19 PM | #6 | ||||||
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thanks yo can i get more input
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09-15-03, 11:38 PM | #7 | |||
Fuck You, I Rhyme Better
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so here the question...do i love this or am i obbsessed...
like they said..it had good flow and looked like u spent mad time on it... the ending had me like this close to tears...cause i think at 1 time i was obsessed with my ex...cause trust me it wasnt love.. back to topic vocab was great, flow just as good... multis were lacking a few good drop but, sorry to be mean, this might not make Legends...but if you put this much effort into all you drop you will def get 1 in... *Its That Simple* |
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09-15-03, 11:51 PM | #8 | ||||||
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THANKS UPPIN
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09-16-03, 08:16 PM | #9 | ||||||
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need more input yall
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