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Old 09-15-03, 09:33 PM   #1
~THA SAINT~
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"Thin line between love and obsession" MUST PEEP THIS REALLY

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For better or worst, we’ll weather the weathers forever together
Never alone, together me and you, we’ll get through whatever
Whether it be sickness or health, even poverty or wealth
Quote “I wouldn’t let u hit the ground if I was falling myself”
I felt her hand, knees trembling, it’s tough to stand
Priest began “we’ve come to form a holy union of woman and man”
“Place the band, do you take this woman to have and to hold”
And instead of saying “I do”, I respond with “hello”

~it was only a dream~

I saw my future in her eyes before she could even say hi
Her smile outshined the sky, with her name she replied
I told her mine, we spoke of times when we were passer bys
Contact with eyes, yet speechless, seems that we both were shy
I had realized this girl was special, before I had met her
But respectful to MY lady, I wasn’t able to sweat her
Still I kept her in my life, my feelings growing deeper within
But when my relationship ended, she felt me as only a friend

Does art imitate life, or does life imitate art
The answer is neither; either that or someone’s not playing their part
I’ve seen romantic comedies, movies of drama and action
And in the end all of them always finish in passion
It’s tough graspin the truth, when your influences are false
Of course love aides in masking most of life’s flaws

Days passed, we still kicked it, the feelings she not feeling
My heart’s hole has me illing, but somehow I’m dealing
It’s killing me slowly, not healing, I’m dying inside
Alone I occasionally cried, but with her I swallowed my pride
Tried changing her heart and mind, many a times
But I was at her side, while various guys were feeding her lines
They’re telling you lies, I pleaded to her, they’d never treat you like me
And you’ll never even know it, unless you try it and see
But she really wasn’t hearing me, she stuck to her ways
And I moved on to another, but my love never phased
Days went away, we chilled less, things weren’t the same
But heart has always raced when I’m hearing her name

Me in tuxedo, she was looking great in gown
We smiled at each as if the only one around
Vows were read, hands grasped, priest asked if there was any objection
And I sat there in the crowd, bit my tongue while, thinking, reflectin

hook(2x)
u make me wanna cross the line between love and obsesion
the way u not feelimg me im fallin into a deep depression
i wanna just hold ya body and keep u in my possesion
thas why u make me wanna cross from love and obsession



My heart bears her impression, in my mind lays no question
That the temptress I'm tempted by is the face of perfection
So I stay by her side, tryna grin through depression
Forced to cross that thin line between love and obsession
We've kindled a friendship, I've garnered her trust
But it isn't enough, I'm still harnessed by lust
And I've tried to express this without being aggressive
But each time that I mention it... I just wind up rejected...
I've tried flowers and poetry, sonnets and je.welery
Still, it ain't worked... She wants nothing to do with me...
For every poem I write, every cent that I spend
She'll still never be mine, except as a friend...
My soul burns as I yearn for her, my blood churns, my world turns for her
Still I've learned it's absurd, my love isn't returned from her...

Years have passed, things ain't changed, I'm still head over heels
And my lonliness persuades me to forget how she feels
I'm a desperate fool for this delicate je.wel
And my patheticness grew as her rhetoric cooled
She'd grown tired of my endless declarations of adoration
Demonstrations of patience, she knew I'd be waiting
Forever to get her, interfering with her pleasure
Like beating cats up who'd hooked up when they met her
I'd stalk her at parties, I'd blow up her cell
Till pigs flew and igloos were present in Hell
Her father would threaten... "STAY AWAY FROM MY DAUGHTER"
But I couldn't ignore her... Not even with a restraining order...
My soul burns as I yearn for her, my blood churns, my world turns for her
Still, my words didn't work, my love wasn't returned from her...

We'd grown up, gone to college, different coasts by design
I met people, but her sketch was still etched in my mind
Couldn't concentrate, eat, sleep or breathe at such a distance
So I packed up my bags and I paid her a visit...

The plane ride from L.A to New York was a breeze
As I planned out the scene, I would drop to my knees
And she'd finally realize the sacrifices that I'd made for her
The pain that I'd been through by being away from her
She'd embrace me and kiss me, and hold me forever
And from that moment on, we'd always be together...
So I got off the plane, hopped a cab to her dorm
But she sounded afraid as I knocked on her door...
"Just a minute" she said, "I'm improperly dressed, SHIT!"
Then two minutes went by... I was promptly arrested...
Spent a day in a holding cell, and by now I was pissed
I'd gone through all this hell, and I'm still getting dissed
My soul burned as I yearned for her, my blood churned, my world turned for her
And since my words didn't work, I went beserk and I murdered her...

HOOK 2x

Rb This ones fo history im a rb legend let it be known im a lover 2

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Old 09-15-03, 10:06 PM   #2
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uppin fo input
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Old 09-15-03, 11:06 PM   #3
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come on yall i put all my feelings into this and thats all u give me nothin at all
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Old 09-15-03, 11:09 PM   #4
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I really like it its str8
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Old 09-15-03, 11:09 PM   #5
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i liked that shit it looks like you put some serious time into that piece good flow

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Old 09-15-03, 11:19 PM   #6
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thanks yo can i get more input
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Old 09-15-03, 11:38 PM   #7
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so here the question...do i love this or am i obbsessed...

like they said..it had good flow and looked like u spent mad time on it...

the ending had me like this close to tears...cause i think at 1 time i was obsessed with my ex...cause trust me it wasnt love.. back to topic

vocab was great, flow just as good...
multis were lacking a few

good drop but, sorry to be mean, this might not make Legends...but if you put this much effort into all you drop you will def get 1 in...

*Its That Simple*
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Old 09-15-03, 11:51 PM   #8
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THANKS UPPIN
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Old 09-16-03, 08:16 PM   #9
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need more input yall
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